Please oh please let them discuss their feelings. it was really interesting to see things from Lex's pov. He has such strong feelings for Chloe i just wish he would share them with her.
more please!!!
-K-
Please oh please let them discuss their feelings. it was really interesting to see things from Lex's pov. He has such strong feelings for Chloe i just wish he would share them with her.
more please!!!
-K-
I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter!
owh! I love it, I love it!
Wonder 'how far Lex is willing to go for her...
Update soon!
Yay! Lex's perspective on the Chlex, thank you!
So, Lex knows he loves Chloe, knows he prefers her to Lana and is still marrying Lana? I hope somewhere you can work in Chloe kneeing him in the groin because he's such a waste of masculinity.
It's sweet that he's prepared for her birthday and that he seemed to have been looking forward to it. He is able to show Chloe he values her more than just sexually. We saw that earlier when he was content to watch her work during their short weekly appointment. It's a shame the sweetness often is mistaken for manipulation in Chloe's perspective.
This new, strangely positive relationship between Lionel and Lillian seems right, though it's not one that I can imagine lasting. Father and son both find ways to turn people against them almost unintentionally, then they aren't able to open themselves up in order to make amends and forgive. I can imagine this example of marriage would contribute to Lex's problems with women. He saw his parents really together, Lionel besotted with his wife until the rift started and widened and they hated each other.
You make it very clear how certain he is of his feelings, but if he's this certain I'm frustrated by his inability to take a tiny emotional leap to trying a real relationship with Chloe. It's very believable but it's another thing that makes me want Lex to have a punch in the balls. He must know that every marriage is not the same, nor will it face the same issues. Or maybe he doesn't? His life and his father's have a lot of similarities, I'll admit, but they're different people at the core.
Again, Lex seems to get 90% to the obvious solution and stop dead, insisting he just can't think any farther. He should know that he's attracted to the forbidden and Chloe's history with him makes her taboo. He should be able to recognize how to keep himself happy and content if her presence does that, especially seeing that he isn't deluding himself about the depth of his feelings.
GAH! Your Lex is a fool! Excellent POV to make him seem himself and also so dumb.
He's such a chicken, as if he's not a complicated man. Well, complicated at least. He's displaying more little boy traits than anything unless they're having desperately passionate sex. Imagine the tension if they weren't at least able to vent that way! *daydreams* Very hot . . .
Blind, blind, stupid Lex! He might tell himself he was surprised by Chloe's reaction but he knows her too well not to have expected it. If he knows Lana's motives, and Clark's response, he should be able to figure out his girlfriend's. A fine example of the Luthor stupidity they've honed to justify and support their actions. I'm glad he doesn't really think he'll be marrying Lana - it explains why he's not on valium.
This amount of trouble for a birthday gift she might not want: Lex, you're a moron deeply in love and trying to win Chloe over. Simple if you let yourself examine the situation clearly.
I could imagine every bit of this, and every facial expression ranging from the puzzled one Chloe was wearing, his apprehension, her insult and his frozen smile as his feelings are hurt. Unfortunately, he might be reaching the end of his efforts to please her and will avoid being romantic.
This very good smut, though I have a complaint. It was all hot and sexy and Lex was being secretly adoring of Chloe, then he thinks of Lana? Worse, he seems to be on a train of thought with it that might be taking him near the solution to his heartbreaking problem, then you throw us and him back into the smut and it's very hot again? It was different and kind of frustrating. No complaints about the hotness as long as you-know-whose-pink-name is left out.
I wasn't happy about the smut interruption, but interrupting the interruption when Lex was almost thinking clearly was mean too. Ignore me, I'm always this conflicted about Lex.
*lusty sigh*
It was sad how the sex ends and there's an immediate effort to be separate and aloof from each other. I know Chloe's talking herself out of the affair and Lex is trying to negotiate around losing her, but they could cuddle! If you're having sex and moaning each other's names and giving gifts and making fun of the other woman, can't you cuddle?!
I'm sorry, but really . . . Angst is good, but Lex wanted a cuddle and he needs it. Medicinal cuddling so he can get to the point of all his Chloe vs. Lana thoughts. Sorry I quoted everything. At least you know I'm interested, right?
Her soul is senstive like a finely made tuning fork. It vibrates and resonates with every little hint of trauma, evil and monstrosity that might be humming in the air, and channels it into expressions of fiction... or recomended websites - somethingeasy
Great story So Lex will not take the news of Chloe ending their little deal to well then. I wonder what he will do to make/convince her to carryon?? I can't wait for the next part.
Gosh! loved the lex POV! they want each other so badly it's...beautifully angsty. i'm glad to know that lex is pretty much feeling the same thing for chloe. and the last part was awesome, just when chloe decided to end everything, lex decided not to let her go. go lex!!!! man i love this fic! more soon please!!!!!
So will this be continuously unrequited tragic angst? Or torturous but eventually rewarding angst? Or is that undecided? It'll be interesting to see how these two actually find out about their feeling for each other. Also, Lana sucks. That is all.
WoW! Exellent update, so finally when Lex decides that he does care for Chloe and will not let her go even when he gets married, is when Chloe finally decides that she needs to get out of their afffair.Stupid people why don't talk to each other about their feelings? I can't wait to read how Lex reacts to Chloe decision to leave, bring on the angst.
please update again soon
ooooh, I second that! Of course, the most OBVIOUS thing for him to do would be for him to confess his own feelings, drop the act with Lana, and start dedicating his personal time to wooing and winning over Chloe.
heh, but where's the fun in that? I ALSO cannot wait to see what kind of desperate measures he resorts to once he realizes that he's about to lose the only person that he actually cares about (heh, actually he LOVES her, but it seems like he's not ready to admit it yet, so we'll let it go for now).
Would he launch a incredibly ruthless seduction campaign to bring her back to him? Or would he skip the obsessive stalking and gift-giving and go immediately to blackmail? Perhaps kidnapping? ooooh, kidnapping... perhaps THAT'S what the 'Disappearing Act' title refers to... Chloe disappears because Lex kidnaps her.
heh, or (more likely) Chloe decides to disappear on her own and go into hiding somewhere. Which leaves Lex madly obsessed with the activity of finding her and Bringing. Her. Back!
*shiver* and *shudder* I can't wait to find out how it turns out. Please update soon.
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