"Touch Me" (PG) (August 23rd, 2010)

[Zannie]

I need to know he hasn’t won yet

I just love this line. The way it's placed within the rest of the sentiment of the piece is really unexpected and powerful. Very nice work!

[jcassy]

Hello Lexie

So beautiful. You really have a way with words, they are like flotting. Thank you for this ficlet.

[veronica525]

What an amazing look into Lex's tortured soul. Beautifully written.

[lexie]

I just love this line. The way it's placed within the rest of the sentiment of the piece is really unexpected and powerful. Very nice work!

That line sneaked itself in, but it felt so right. Lionel's always been the demon, the shadow that's never ceased to haunt him.

Thank you all for your "beautiful" words; they're greatly appreciated. Hopefully, they'll fuel my muse to get down to work again.

It's really funny. Two of you have used words in your feedback which people always apply to my mother's work as a visual artist. Describing this piece as soothing and saying it provokes a feeling of being 'floating' is the best compliment ever.

[Esther25jm]

That, sweetie, was beautiful.

[lkedino]

great story

[daria_103]

Another beautifully written piece, really well done.

[starmoon]

this is truly beautiful and i loved it. this story brought a little bit of tears to my eyes.

[~*~Tasha~*~]

That was absolutely beautiful. I reread it a couple times through just to make sure that I didn't miss anything (the emotions of it), and I did feel more of its depth with each reread. It was excellent.

[Chloe Gilmore O'niel]

As always Lexie that was beautiful