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    Re: Close Your Eyes (R) 24/02/10

    I've been missing your reviews lately, Rocío. I'm happy to know your absence was due to being immersed in creative work, so I'm looking forward to it.

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    Oh wow!!! That was so sensual. I just love how Lex was trying to get Chloe to see that she isn't just an afterthought!!!!
    Sensual with a strong hint of angsty desperation was exactly what I aimed at. Thanks for your lovely words.
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    Re: Close Your Eyes (R) 24/02/10

    Wow!!! That was amazing!! I don't even have words, but I'll try. Lol I loved when you said that neither of them were afterthoughts in that bed, because that pretty much sums up my love for Chlex in a nutshell. I have always hated that they were always the second choice, the consolation prize, and I believe that if the writers had put them together it would have been epic. They would cherish each other properly. I loved the way Lex told her to close her eyes. She needed to FEEL how right it is with him. Good lord, this was brilliant!
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    Re: Close Your Eyes (R) 24/02/10

    Thanks for your beautiful words. I'm blushing profusely here. Really glad you share my view on the way Chloe and Lex have always been treated as second best. They deserve so much more.
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    That was amazing! The words were so vivid and so sensual. I agree with what you and CrazyAsh, that Chloe and Lex were always treated as second best and as consolation prizes when they should really be first. I honestly took a deep breath when I finished reading.

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    Re: Close Your Eyes (R) 24/02/10

    Loved it
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