"Mirror" (Companion piece to "From Afar"): PG-13/15

[lexie]

I like that you had Chloe being able to sense Lex's watching her--nice

Lex is too intense a man for his presence not to be felt even through the lens of a camera. I´m glad you´ve appreciated it, Kit.

[purplemoon123]

Wow. That was amazing!!

Poor Chloe has been through a horrible year.

She stands up on wobbly legs and takes a deep breath and, before she can stop herself, four words are whispered in a raspy voice she barely recognises as her own: Wish you were here.

Love!!!

[dagney]

Once again I'm blown away with the poignant expression of emotions you are not only able to identify but write. This piece and Afar are fantastic. Looking forward to more.


Dagney

[superag]

Really nice descriptions of the murders and how they are affecting her psyche. Good job!

[MelBee1985]

Hehe Love the parallels between Lex and Chloe... When you think about it, they made her this year less ethical and mre dark (which I hate because they chse THIS year and not last year uggggh) and it culd have opened to a less yet still evil form of Lex, hehe. Poor Chloe.... Had a rough year... I always knew Davis wasn't worth it.. hehe

Nice story.

[lexie]

She stands up on wobbly legs and takes a deep breath and, before she can stop herself, four words are whispered in a raspy voice she barely recognises as her own: Wish you were here.

Love!!!

That and the last lines were my favourite parts, too.

Once again I'm blown away with the poignant expression of emotions you are not only able to identify but write.

You´ve made me blush, Sherry. It´s certainly a great compliment to know I´ve been able to move someone with my attempt at giving some sense to what they´ve done with Chloe this season.

Really nice descriptions of the murders and how they are affecting her psyche. Good job!

Thanks, Mary. It was satisfying to be able to show what Chloe was experiencing without having to be gory about it.

Hehe Love the parallels between Lex and Chloe...

I couldn´t help but notice this striking parallelism between both characters´ lives- they lived through similar stuff when they were 22.

When you think about it, they made her this year less ethical and mre dark (which I hate because they chse THIS year and not last year uggggh) and it culd have opened to a less yet still evil form of Lex, hehe.

Yeah, dark Chlex would have been a hell of a lot more interesting than what they put on screen. Although seeing what they´ve done with what they got I´m happy they didn´t mess with our dream story line. I´d much rather read it in fanfics than see it slaughtered by SV´s scriptwriters.

Poor Chloe.... Had a rough year... I always knew Davis wasn't worth it.. hehe

Chlavis Fans on these boards will kill us both but I couldn´t agree more.

[MelBee1985]

Chlavis Fans on these boards will kill us both but I couldn´t agree more.

Hehe.. I don't want to sound harsh, but I couldn't care less of what Chlavis fans think. It's a Chlex board here. It's the only thing that really matter when it comes to shipping in this website.

If people are allowed here to bash Lois regardless there are people here who like her (I do), well, I'm allowed to bash Davis or Chalvis. And I do.. hehe.

Doesn't mean I'm attacking the people who says them...

[lexie]

Hehe.. I don't want to sound harsh, but I couldn't care less of what Chlavis fans think. It's a Chlex board here. It's the only thing that really matter when it comes to shipping in this website.

To each his own. I have a formed opinion on Davis and Chlavis but the diplomat in me tries not to offend the sensibility of those who are such faithful readers of mine and who also happen to ship this new pairing

If people are allowed here to bash Lois regardless there are people here who like her (I do), well, I'm allowed to bash Davis or Chalvis. And I do.. hehe.

Oh, I do like Lois as a character and she tends to be the only non-Chlex character I feel comfortable writing! I´ve had a ball penning her scenes in Crossing Paths, Rebuilding and The Countdown.

[lexie]

If you´ve enjoyed this ficlet, you can go ahead and read the sequel I´ve just posted: "Lean on Me" (One-shot)

[starmoon]

that was amazing and i just loved it. poor chloe she never seem to be happy.