Hell no this doesn't suck!
Nice characterization, good flow, easy read. This was a wonderful beginning, and I'd love to see you continue.
So hopefully you'll update soon?
Hell no this doesn't suck!
Nice characterization, good flow, easy read. This was a wonderful beginning, and I'd love to see you continue.
So hopefully you'll update soon?
Great beginning. Can't wait to read more!
Oh what a wonderful start! I can't wait to read the next chapter and see what Chloe and Lois work out for a plan...
Hey! That's a great start!
Can't wait for the update!
So far, so good. Of course, you have a captive audience in me as I feel exactly the same as Chloe
It definetly does not suck!
Great Start!
Please update soon.
Oh my god! That's really really good!!! I really love the fact that Chloe asks Lois to make Lex fall in love with her because I thought she was going to fight her feelings and ask Lois to help her think of someone else. It's cool to see a fic where Chloe isn't in self-denial. Please write more soon. I love this and I really can't wait to see what's going to happen.
Damn it, my computer must be broken again, cause I clicked on to the next page, and there's NO NEW UPDATE? What the heck happened there? Just when I was totally engrossed in this story... and... then you go leaving it there? Is anybody else experiencing this problem? But you know what Kim... I'll be willing to forgive you if you maybe... I dunno... emailed me the chapter!!! lolk. Just to clear up matters
Seriously though brilliant start, I can't wait to see what kind of ways Chloe goes about trying to make Lex fall in love with her! It's going to be excited!
Please update soon!
Great job hun!
Great start so far! Update soon.
The title is excellent. I had not tried a new story in several months, contenting myself with the updates on my three favorite, long running stories (thanks zannie and blue&sabby for the regular updates) but I felt compelled to read the start of your story because the title is SO intriguing. I am not disappointed at all. I hope we can look forward to regular and numerous updates ?
(BTW I don't watch the show anymore so I am a little confused as to what Lois is doing at the Talon. If someone could PM me with the explanation I'd be grateful).
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