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    Re: Startling Revelation *Updated 3-22-06 Chapter 4 * (NC-17)

    I love Chloe being the boss. Lex doesnt know what he is dealing with. I am glad they are working to become friends again.


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    Re: Startling Revelation *Updated 3-22-06 Chapter 4 * (NC-17)

    Loved the update. Nice reference to MTV Cribs (lol). So, Lex watches the Cartoon Network huh, very interesting. Can't wait to find out what the next step in Chloe's plan to get Lex is.

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    Re: Startling Revelation *Updated 3-22-06 Chapter 4 * (NC-17)

    I loved it...all of it...your Lois is supreme and even makes me feel a little sad i don't have any female cousins and Lex watching cartoons??? To die for! I also liked it a lot that you're taking your time and allowing them to build up to a relationship instead of just having them jump at it...friends first is definetly a nice policy...as long as it doesn't take too long hehehhe
    so please update soon???
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    Re: Startling Revelation *Updated 3-22-06 Chapter 4 * (NC-17)

    Oh man, but I adore this fic!

    I love that Chloe has Lex so thrown off simply by being his friend, and treating him kindly. He is so used to the selfish "friendship" of Clark and Lana that he doesn't kow what a real friend is.

    And good for Lois for encouraging Chloe in her pursuit of Lex--she really is a great big sister.

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    Re: Startling Revelation *Updated 3-22-06 Chapter 4 * (NC-17)

    Well hey, I really love this fic, and i just adore the banter between lex and chloe, and chloe and lois. MORE!! please more.

    And just to say, this is my first review since my bout of lurkerdom. which I have now thrown off! Yay!

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    Re: Startling Revelation *Updated 3-22-06 Chapter 4 * (NC-17)

    What a delightful update. I absolutely adore Lois in this story. That woman is funny, and she's got some great advice. Glad to see she's pushing Chloe in the right direction. And yay for Chloe taking the initiative and showing up unexpectedly at Lex's with Chinese food.

    She turned to go, but paused again. “Hey Lex?”
    “Yes Chloe?”
    “I’ll see you next Sunday.”
    He was silent for a long moment then: “Okay.”
    Love love loved how you ended the chapter. Very sweet moment.

    And hee, Lex watches Cartoon Network

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    Re: Startling Revelation *Updated 3-22-06 Chapter 4 * (NC-17)

    Love the new update and how you incorporated MTV Cribs. LOL! CAn't wait to see what Chloe does next!

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    Re: Startling Revelation *Updated 3-22-06 Chapter 4 * (NC-17)

    Ah, a fan of the cartoon network. A man after my own heart. Can't wait till the new chapter comes out.

    See what Lois has to say about their little chinese/nap time adventure.

    Did the nasty with fishboy, did she? Thats kinda......the guy looked like a frat truck. And not in a good way.



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    Re: Startling Revelation *Updated 3-22-06 Chapter 4 * (NC-17)

    I love this story! Please update!
    Beatrice: You have stayed me in a happy hour, I was about to protest I loved you.
    Benedick: And do it, with all thy heart.
    Beatrice: I love you with so much of my heart, that none is left to protest.

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    Re: Startling Revelation *Updated 3-22-06 Chapter 4 * (NC-17)

    Oh Lois *shakes head*. Loved Chloe and Lex's little dinner

    He’ll just sit there ignoring her until she became so uncomfortable or bored that she would just give up and leave.

    He obviously must’ve forgotten who he was dealing with.
    especally those lines. So wonderful.

    We really should do away with school it only interups perfectly happy lives.

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