Thank you so much, SabrinaI really wasn't sure if this story was going to work out. Building up all the evil tension and then smashing it with the gag that it was all such a simple and ridiculous thing sounded like an awesome idea in my head, but I had no idea if I could pull it off on the page. Seems I managed it though
I think there is still a real danger that if Lex became a loving husband and father he would still forever be trying to remain a good person, because he's still going to want everything, albeit for Chloe and their offspring rather than just for himself. I'm glad I made him loving enough as well as competitive; that was important to me. As was showing that Chloe was equally determined and not to be messed with when it came to her family. I mean sure, Clark Kent most likely wouldn't cheat at such an event, but against Lex, you don't think he might just be tempted? I certainly think he might, and I think that would occur to Chloe too.
Really grateful for the feedback - always wonderful to have your opinions and praise![]()
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