IŽve just been checking out feedback and realised I forgot to answer the only review on my work in this thread.
Yes, maybe youŽre right- maybe the one I used for A Modern Persephone was more organic; however, I wanted to pay a kind of homage to the poet whose worked inspired me on this occasion.
IŽm glad you were able to "feel" that while reading it because it was exactly what I intended to achieve.I loved how you captured the paradoxical difficulty and ease with which both Chloe and Lex ‘surrendered’ to each other, to destiny, to their own desires… It happened as much because they were tired of fighting as well as because they felt there was great happiness waiting for them upon surrendering. Beautiful work!
I hope youŽll find the rest of my work thus satisfying.
Thanks for reading and reviewing my little ficlet.
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