Beautiful story! I loved that Lex and Chloe were finally able to talk to one another rather than Lex simply lurking in the shadows.
This piece definitely added some closure to the series that you have started here. Great job!
Beautiful story! I loved that Lex and Chloe were finally able to talk to one another rather than Lex simply lurking in the shadows.
This piece definitely added some closure to the series that you have started here. Great job!
No offense to this fic, but this better not happen in S9. Even if they try and have Chloe being pregnant with Davis' baby“I´m... pregnant,” she confessed, her voice cracking.
But back to this fic, I do like that Chloe and Lex are turning to each other for comfort and support--very sweet
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Yes, it needed some closure and I´m almost convinced I´ll leave it here for readers to make their own minds as to what Chloe and Lex´s future will have in store for them.
was my reaction when I saw this episode and I used it because I wanted to give it my own spin since I´m afraid of what they might do with such a story line. I hope they won´t use a pregnancy and that if they do that Jimmy ends up being the father. No offence to your Chlavis shipping, Kit, but the thing that made me tremble the most was the possibilty of somekind of Alien-like baby- God forbid.
Yes, Chloe does need someone to turn to now that everyone has abandoned her- farm boy included.- and I thought this would be the perfect chance to reintroduce Lex in the scene (in fanfiction, of course; I want MR to stay miles away from this show.)But back to this fic, I do like that Chloe and Lex are turning to each other for comfort and support--very sweet
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Great companion piece, it was great to get some face to face time between Chloe and Lex after the build up from the first two parts.
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WOW!! That was amazing!! Way better than SV!! What I hate most of this show is that 'heroes' are such hypocritical assholes, with holier than thou attitudes. That can get away with murder and act as if they are better than anyone else. And like always Chloe has to pick up the pieces of not only her crumbling life but those of others.
Love that Chloe still has Lex to catch her and that they have each other to lean on.He witnessed the moment her restraint emotions overcame her and, a couple of metres away from her, he hastened his steps, dropping his walking stick and breaking into a sudden run in time to catch her fragile frame as she fainted.
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i love it though i felt like crying. i am glad that lex and chloe have each other since they need one another and are perfect for one another.
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Perfect ending
Loved it
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