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    Beautiful story! I loved that Lex and Chloe were finally able to talk to one another rather than Lex simply lurking in the shadows.

    This piece definitely added some closure to the series that you have started here. Great job!

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    “I´m... pregnant,” she confessed, her voice cracking.
    No offense to this fic, but this better not happen in S9. Even if they try and have Chloe being pregnant with Davis' baby

    But back to this fic, I do like that Chloe and Lex are turning to each other for comfort and support--very sweet
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    Quote Originally Posted by SuperChickx1401 View Post
    This piece definitely added some closure to the series that you have started here. Great job!
    Yes, it needed some closure and I´m almost convinced I´ll leave it here for readers to make their own minds as to what Chloe and Lex´s future will have in store for them.

    Quote Originally Posted by Kit Merlot View Post
    No offense to this fic, but this better not happen in S9. Even if they try and have Chloe being pregnant with Davis' baby
    was my reaction when I saw this episode and I used it because I wanted to give it my own spin since I´m afraid of what they might do with such a story line. I hope they won´t use a pregnancy and that if they do that Jimmy ends up being the father. No offence to your Chlavis shipping, Kit, but the thing that made me tremble the most was the possibilty of somekind of Alien-like baby- God forbid.

    But back to this fic, I do like that Chloe and Lex are turning to each other for comfort and support--very sweet
    Yes, Chloe does need someone to turn to now that everyone has abandoned her- farm boy included.- and I thought this would be the perfect chance to reintroduce Lex in the scene (in fanfiction, of course; I want MR to stay miles away from this show.)
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    Great companion piece, it was great to get some face to face time between Chloe and Lex after the build up from the first two parts.

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    Quote Originally Posted by daria_103 View Post
    Great companion piece, it was great to get some face to face time between Chloe and Lex after the build up from the first two parts.
    Thanks once again for your constant support of my stories.

    I´m pleased you´ve enjoyed the "resolution" of this unusually angstier and darker series of mine- the ending is certainly open but, so far, I´m tempted to leave it there.
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    WOW!! That was amazing!! Way better than SV!! What I hate most of this show is that 'heroes' are such hypocritical assholes, with holier than thou attitudes. That can get away with murder and act as if they are better than anyone else. And like always Chloe has to pick up the pieces of not only her crumbling life but those of others.

    He witnessed the moment her restraint emotions overcame her and, a couple of metres away from her, he hastened his steps, dropping his walking stick and breaking into a sudden run in time to catch her fragile frame as she fainted.
    Love that Chloe still has Lex to catch her and that they have each other to lean on.

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    Quote Originally Posted by purplemoon123 View Post
    What I hate most of this show is that 'heroes' are such hypocritical assholes, with holier than thou attitudes. That can get away with murder and act as if they are better than anyone else.
    Yes, this has always been one of the things I´ve found most objectionable of SV. Are we supposed to be on their side just because we´re told they´re the good guys? And then we´re called Lex-apologists! Pfft!!!
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    i love it though i felt like crying. i am glad that lex and chloe have each other since they need one another and are perfect for one another.

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    Re: Lean on Me (Doomsday revisited-Companion piece to "Mirror") PG-13

    Quote Originally Posted by starmoon View Post
    i love it though i felt like crying.
    It was what I felt like while writing it so it was definitely the mood I was striving to create. Glad you were able to enjoy it. Once again thanks for reading and taking the time to leave your impressions.
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    Re: Lean on Me (Doomsday revisited-Companion piece to "Mirror") PG-13

    Perfect ending

    Loved it
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