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    That was amazing. Really. Dark and lovely.

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    Ummm.. .Chlex jaded-swan's Avatar
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    It's dark and really speaks of who Lex is or who he is going to become. Love the lines
    Taken the pre-sharpened knife, and plunged deeply into vulnerable, untouched flesh. She might not feel it yet, but already her body was cooling, preparing itself for eternal slumber.
    the eternal slumber and body cooling image is very strong both beautiful and powerful

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    Originally posted by Susie Q@Nov 18 2003, 06:52 AM
    Whoa Sara….powerful piece. Brilliant portrayal of a Lex struggling to reconcile his guilt for his role in setting Chloe up as a pawn in the Luthor wars, that is, until he reaches the ultimate rationalization
    Fantastic Job! :worship2:
    Exactly. I this piece acknowledges exactly why Lex becomes evil. Not because of Clark, but because of Chloe.

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    Saying this story is beautiful is too little.

    Originally posted by beautiful N' Bruised@Nov 17 2003, 10:36 PM
    Because the sunset crept up on him from nowhere, stealing the darkness. The farming community of Smallville awoke early, and soon the bodies would begin to rise, going about their mundane daily activities.
    That sentence made me think of corpses rising from their graves (am I crazy?) and introduces so well the atmosphere of death the story acquires going on. Awesome.

    Gaia

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    that was.... whoa!
    I can't properly explain myself, your story left me shocked. in a good way, I mean...

    this piece acknowledges exactly why Lex becomes evil. Not because of Clark, but because of Chloe.
    that was what sienna wrote, and I really agree with her..

    so dark and so well written, love it!

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    Re: Lair: G - Magnetic coda. Lex POV

    i loved it but it scares me for chloe has no way out of this one.

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    Re: Lair: G - Magnetic coda. Lex POV

    beautifully written. really well-done. sigh. a part of me just loves angst. the masochistic part, i suppose.

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