wow. i really loved this.
wow. i really loved this.
And here we have the sexual tension along with a heat wave. What more could a girl ask for? Oh yeah. Lex to empathize with. And look at this, you’ve provided everything here.
The fact that Lex was a little bit slow on the uptake with the air-conditioner being broken made me laugh. Especially the fact that it took a half naked sweaty girl running a glass of iced tea over her. It seems to me that he was slightly distracted.
I loved the build up between the two characters and of course the explosive ending.
And I don’t think I mentioned it before but your song choices are really appropriate.
Overall I really liked this one and thank you so much for writing it.
txalb
Wow. Just wow. I love how this came together. Sexy and angsty and gripping. Great story!
Great fic
*Coffee Break 9:00 to 5:00 Daily.
*Heaven doesn't want me and hell is afraid I'll take over.
*Are you crazy?
*From zero to insane in 1.5 seconds!
*If I agree with you, then we'd both be wrong!
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