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    Some Kind of Miracle (R)

    TITLE: Some Kind of Miracle
    AUTHOR: Kaya
    DESCRIPTION: One lonely night was all it took.
    RATING: R for Sexual Content
    DISCLAIMER: I own none of these characters. I do not own the song; it’s by Miss Kelly “American Idol I” Clarkson. I just like to borrow.

    A/N: I’m new at erotic writing, so there are two possible problems with this. The scene could be somewhat choppy, and I don’t know if it should be NC-17. By my standards, it is rather tame, so I’ll take a chance with R, but if you are offended by pretty hot stuff, I’d suggest averting your eyes. :biggrin: Enjoy!

    Prayed for an angel
    To come in the night
    And shine some sweet light on me
    Found only strangers
    Then you came to me


    She had never expected this. She bowed her head as he came into the bedroom door, dressed only in a silk robe.

    As he slowly strode towards her, she remembered that this could only be one night. After all, their problems were breaking both of their spirits. The loneliness, evident in their eyes when they first saw each other since he disappeared, had become unbearable.

    When she unfolded her arms and her legs, opening herself to him, she knew that it was the right thing..the only thing to do. Their secret alliance was the one thing that kept them sane. From that moment at the Torch office, their bond was set, and when things fell into place, they were together through it all.

    Yet, until now, they had maintained a strictly professional friendship. But now as he knelt in front of her, reaching for one of her slender legs to caress it gently and seductively, all things platonic between them just flew out of the window.

    When she arched her back and moaned in arousal as he slowly stripped her thigh-highs off, the thoughts of her broken friendships and dangerous liaisons drifted away. As his lips followed his hands up and down her toned thighs, eliciting a throaty groan from her, he had forgotten about vengeance and deceit.

    Adrenaline began to drive her body as it had when she went on adventures to hunt for her once closest friend, but those trips only affected her physically. When he tore her shirt open, she knew that her mind and her heart were very well inebriated with the lusty energy that surged between them.

    Her hand snaked around his head, jerking him closer, and her lips captured his in a firm but caressing grip. The desperation in her was perfectly evident in the way she kissed him, hoping that his presence would be able to eradicate all consequences from her feigned allegiance with his father.

    He reciprocated that need with his determined hands, feeling her all over. When he reached her clearly aroused breast, he squeezed it firmly, and a moan escaped her lips along with a husky declaration of his name. And his world of treacherous wives and nefarious fathers instantly vanished.

    All that was left was the two of them. Touching, feeling, tasting, they drowned their senses with each other. Within moments, they were intoxicated with these sensations, wanting more by the second.

    When their outer layers were finally shed, the bond once brought together by mutual loneliness was forged with lust and yearning as he entered her in one thrust. A guttural gasp escaped from her as she dug her fingers into his back, holding on to the one thing that was going right for her.

    He pushed again and again; each flash of pleasure and each flash of pain a reminder that even in this dark world, he could still feel alive.

    As they were nearing the edge, he breathlessly whispered to her ear, “Tell me you love me.” Her eyes flew open, amazed at the implications of the simple request. When she saw the need reflected from his eyes, she groaned in pleasure, collecting what energy she had left to whisper back, “I love you, Lex.”

    The declaration drove her over the edge as she climaxed, every muscle in her body clenched and gripped to him. He followed soon after, shuddering at the emotions she had him feel.

    When speech and motor skills finally came back to them, he lifted himself from her. Thinking that the declaration was just a spur of the sexual moment, she averted her eyes with hopes that he would leave quickly. But he sensed her body tensing up and realized that he had forgotten. Lying back down beside her, he cupped her chin to face him.

    With a sincere smile on his face, he told her with a newfound confidence: “I love you, Chloe.”

    Just when I’d given up, you gave me love
    My world was tumbling down
    You turned it around
    You are some kind of miracle to me.


    THE END

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    Originally posted by deessedelune@Oct 4 2003, 01:27 PM
    A/N: I’m new at erotic writing, so there are two possible problems with this. The scene could be somewhat choppy, and I don’t know if it should be NC-17. By my standards, it is rather tame, so I’ll take a chance with R, but if you are offended by pretty hot stuff, I’d suggest averting your eyes. :biggrin: Enjoy!

    I don't see anything wrong with this at all.

    It was perfect. Just perfect. This is what should happen on the show. *sighs* ah well, one can only hope...

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    I guess i have been desenstized, this is not very explicit, so R rating is fine. The story is great, and I echo Aimee...if it only happen in the show...sigh.

    And you like Kelly Clarkson too? So do I! My fav song of her is Before Your Love and I used it to write a Chlex songfic.

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    That was so sweet. Really nicely written and brought you right there with both of their emotions for each other. Good job.

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    :biggrin: loved it!

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    That was so sweet!

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    Aww that was sweet.


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    :applause: :applause: :applause: :love: :love: :applause: :applause: :applause:
    perfect yay just perfect

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    That was lovely! I can't believe that it was your first time writing this kind of thing. Well done :clap:

    xadie xx

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    That was beautiful! :worship2:

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