Lullaby - PG-13 (Completed)

[chloedreamer]

I would like to see a sequel as well to see how Lex handle being in a relationship with Chloe having learned they were half siblings. Of course then there is the fact that Chloe is pregnant with his child.

Their was a eww factor there but always one of saddness because just as Lex was letting love into his life it had to be ruined by his Father's past.

All the while I was reading this one thing popped in my head please don't let Chloe ever find out the truth.

[somethingeasy]

And then there was silence. Utterly shocking silence. Lex was mystified. Lionel Luthor, who loved nothing more than to slice and jar with his tongue, stood saying not a word. More than that, Lionel’s mask seemed shattered, and some real emotions appeared to be seeping through the cracks

It was interesting to see that there ARE some things that Lionel would react to with horror and indignation. This was an excellent (and immensely creepy) fic. The flashbacks were beautifully paced to deliver the final punch to the readers.

[Kit Merlot]

This has to be one of the most orginal stories I have ever read--excellent work

[excusemymuse]

wow, incredibly unexpected twist at the end there. I kinda thought it was going to be Chloe that cheated. Then Lionel telling Lex this and then Lex not wanting to believe it. And that those 'flashbacks' were really flashforwards to see Lex unsure about his daughter. But nice ending anyways

[Lune]

Really good Sara, it was amazing. The flashbacks were a nice touch, they made it more interesting. An *ahem* interesting premise and it was really well written. Loved it.

And one last thing. No offense, but eww.

^ What she said. ^.^b

[tatie87]

OMG this story is twisted. I would have loved to see what happened with Chloe being preggers and the ramifications of them sharing 50% of their DNA.

[Azulblade]

i was disturbed before i even started reading it because i had been told what it was about and wow...that was great writing, i couldn't stop reading it. Reading the other reviews commenting on the ick and eww factor as well as the creepiness i have to agree but i can't seem to care because you wrote it so well. Excellent work, trully excellent.

[purplemoon123]

Apparently I didn't review the first time I read this story, for that I am sorry because this story is just amazing!!!

Like many other reviews WOW and EWWWW!!

[cuttie_blossom]

i've been tweedling around about reading this fic, knowing what its about...
but now... wow!

[JennyD13]

This fic is freaking amazing! It was dark and melancholy and fucked up and PERFECT! Bravo!