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    Ok, whoa, that was.... wow.
    Great fic, awesome plot, really great job!

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    Whoa . I am completely stunned right now. This was extremely well written , but it was also extremely and deeply disturbing. I keep staring at my monitor and just blinking. Definately a shocker .

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    Woah.

    I'll say it again.

    Woah!

    Amazing job of intercutting the flashbacks and current time.

    This is NOT the most comfortable subject matter, but the fact that you make it work so well shows your great knack for getting inside Lex's mind and heart.

    wow

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    Ooo…that was a delightfully twisted little tale. I thought it was brilliant.

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    Wow, that certainly was twisted! Of course, I loved it, it was extremely well written even though it had the "ewww" factor.

    Kerry

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    Brilliant, just brilliant!

    I'm glad I read this now before I finished the fic I was writing. It has a really similar plot. Plus, you wrote it a million times better than I ever could. I'm in awe of your writing right now. Keep up the excellent work!

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    That was just crepy and wrong on so many levels but I love it that Lex will let nothing get in his way of being with Chloe.

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    Re: Lullaby - PG-13 (Completed)

    wow
    nicely written kept me guessing till the end. then ewwwww. but great story

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    Re: Lullaby - PG-13 (Completed)

    That was such an original idea for a fic, I've never read anything like it. You handled the concept extremely well.


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    Re: Lullaby - PG-13 (Completed)

    Wow! I mean... Wow!
    *Coffee Break 9:00 to 5:00 Daily.
    *Heaven doesn't want me and hell is afraid I'll take over.
    *Are you crazy?
    *From zero to insane in 1.5 seconds!
    *If I agree with you, then we'd both be wrong!

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