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Thread: Initiation, NC-17 (April 4, 2010)

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    Re: Initiation, NC-17 (April 4, 2010)

    I liked the humor in this story, intended or not. Really lines like:
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    "Just don't scream like I'm killing you,” he smiled, arching his signature eyebrow. “It's a nice hotel.”
    'He needed to stop being huge and on top of her. He needed to be not so hot and everywhere.'
    are funny but to then be levelled by these words:
    Power was difficult, Lex thought. It was even more difficult to realize power came and went without warning. He could understand Chloe’s frustrated desire to tame it, use it somehow. It was there in her, but it was complemented by morality and optimism. She would probably never be comfortable with the things she was capable of doing. He didn’t know anyone utterly comfortable with their power who wasn’t also a monster.
    it's pretty darn good and a great read.
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    Re: Initiation, NC-17 (April 4, 2010)

    Awesome fic.....

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    Re: Initiation, NC-17 (April 4, 2010)

    Oh I loved it! Leave me wanting more.

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    Re: Initiation, NC-17 (April 4, 2010)

    wow! That was some vivid imagery there. Very very hot! whew! This was a great first time fic. I liked the set up for it and the insight into Chloe's feelings, the part about her feeling powerless. I like how Lex was very sweet and gentle with her but it wasn't too fluffy. It was very true to their characters.

    “That’s nice of you to say, but I’ll refrain from having t-shirts made up to that effect. My reputation is bad enough without literally advising people to lock up their daughters,” he quipped.
    LOL!! Great ending. Great fic!

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    Re: Initiation, NC-17 (April 4, 2010)

    Love the fic. Thanks so much for posting.

    Keep up the good work! :-)

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    Re: Initiation, NC-17 (April 4, 2010)

    This is the first fanfic that I have read in 6 months. It was wonderful. It reminded me of why I joined this forum.

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    Re: Initiation, NC-17 (April 4, 2010)

    Smoking hot story. Loved it and wish it was longer.

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    Re: Initiation, NC-17 (April 4, 2010)

    I loved this fanfic. It was fantastic.

    Thanks for posting.

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    Re: Initiation, NC-17 (April 4, 2010)

    Very poignant, and realistic. Thank you.

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    Re: Initiation, NC-17 (April 4, 2010)

    great fic

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