The Upper Hand (R) 1/31/10

[hfce]

You know I love your writing and this story has been so excellent right the way through, but I have to say the end really disappointed me. I guess I'm used to everything ending up Chlex eventually, and this turned on me and didn't do that.

I know the most important thing was Lex being brought down to nothing and then rebuilding his life from there, but I wanted the Chlex too. Yeah, awesomely written, but very disappointed by the end...

You wrote exactly what I tried to write in my review but failed.

[Ultra]

You wrote exactly what I tried to write in my review but failed.

Glad to be of help

[superag]

I told you there was a an ending that most would probably not care for. Though it ended as I intended. I respect your opinions and love them. Just to let you know, the 'fake romance' bug hit and there will be a shorter fic that ends in gooey goodness will debut soon.

Love!

[elementia]

I'm glad to finally read the end of the story.
But I definitely didn't expect it to end like that.
It was different that's for sure, but interesting none the less.
Good work

[gimmick_86]

Love it......love it......love it....

[emms14]

I absolutely loved this story, but I'm devastated that after all Chloe did for Lex to help him turn his life around they didn't end up together!!! Very good story though, I really enjoyed getting different perspectives on all of the characters.

-emms14

[daria_103]

Great story. I have to admit that I'm extremely disappointed that it didn't have a Chlex ending although with everything that went on between them (it pains me to admit ) I do think it made sense that they their lives veered in different paths and they couldn't build a relationship from where they both stood at the stories end.

It was a very interesting read to follow Lex's journey as he rebuilt his life and it was satisfying to know he found happiness at the end, even if it wasn't the happiness that I wanted it to be.

[sullivangirl]

this is my 2nd chlex fanfic that ive read here and i like the story, i like the way you write lionel and lex scene together, didn't expect the ending tho..

[Fanficlover1984]

Amazing start, really interesting premise!

[Fanficlover1984]

Great second chapter! Loving how strong Chloe is.