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    Re: Sunburn (R/NC-17) Completed 6/28/2008

    This was very dark and weird but good.
    "Everyone seems normal until you get to know them. "

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    Re: Sunburn (R/NC-17) Completed 6/28/2008

    Incredible! Very dark and twisted. I love how you took Lex's obsessive nature to an extreme. Absolutely fascinating story. Great job!!

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    Re: Sunburn (R/NC-17) Completed 6/28/2008

    Oh Wow, that was just fantastic.

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    Re: Sunburn (R/NC-17) Completed 6/28/2008

    Very twisted... But strangely oh-so-good

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    Re: Sunburn (R/NC-17) Completed 6/28/2008

    This was a great little story. I'm all for an obsessed twisted Lex, as long as he's obsessed with Chloe. I liked that this story was so gritty.

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    Re: Sunburn (R/NC-17) Completed 6/28/2008

    Wow.
    I've read tons of stories between Lex and Chloe, and there have been many takes on Lex's personality. This one right here, to me, has been the most realistic. Lex has always struggled with his own happiness, which tends to go to the dark side, and doing the right thing. Now that he doesn't have to worry about doing the right thing, he seems to be himself. It's disturbing, but it's so Lex. Great job with the story. It's become one of my favorites.

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    Re: Sunburn (R/NC-17) Completed 6/28/2008

    Definitely the darkest Chlex story I've ever read. You captured obsession completely. Brilliant!!!!!

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    Re: Sunburn (R/NC-17) Completed 6/28/2008

    i think i read this story like 5 times... i still love it... i still want to read it again... brilliant!

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    Re: Sunburn (R/NC-17) Completed 6/28/2008

    ok...wow... let me catch my breath for a minute. This was one of the best thigns I've read on the net. Seriously.

    Harsh, foul, repulsive nad utterly compelling.

    lex mad nasty and truly a meglomanic.

    far out I htink you've blown me away.

    not saying thanks
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    OMG THIS IS FREAKING HARSHLY AMAZING

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    Re: Sunburn (R/NC-17) Completed 6/28/2008

    Disturbing, but fascinating. Great job!

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