The Undoing of Lex Luthor (R) Completed 7/11/08

[purplemoon123]

Those last lines are just gut wrenching. Wow.

Will Chloe let herself get caught up in Lex's fantasy life??? Will Lex start remembering??? What is Lionel's next move????

Rocio

[lexie]

I´m loving this one, superag, and look forward to your next updating.

The dialogue and the situation in which Lex and Chloe find themselves in are heart-wrenching.

[BeachBabi]

Aww I cried at the end... Wondeful update and very well written. Can't wait for the next update..

Waiting Impatiently... Update Please =)

~BeachBabi~

[lj715]

ACK!! Excellent update, can;t wait for the next chapter.

[dagney]

Powerfully written, I was so worried that lex was going to stoke out. I'm not sure who I'm starting to feel more empathy for. Lex and his manufactured world, his painful trauma or Chloe who is so torn between the hate for what Lex has done in the past and the Lex who she is beginning to love. I'm afraid about Lionel he always seems to have his hand in Lex's brain metaphorically and I'm thinking even physically once again( is he being drugged?)

Thanks for the uspadte. Dagney

[hfce]

Aww I want him not to remember so badly. When he does Chloe will be in a world of hurt. I hope he does remember this maybe they can be friends once the truth comes out.

[showntell]

So very intrigued....

Poor Chloe, she is being mind-fucked almost as much as Lex

[kcsgirl82]

It's too late now Chloe has fallen for Lex and she won't want to let him go when he remembers everything, hopefully he won't want to let her go either!!!

[Kit Merlot]

This was a wonderful update!

I hate that Lex is in as much physical agony as he is because those headaches must be horrible, but maybe once he stops questioning his relationship with Chloe, he'll be able to accept his new life.

And Chloe is in emotional pain because while she hates Lex for the things he's done, there is still a part of her that wants him to become a better man.

Keep up the great work in this story

[marcy2401]

I get the feeling that Chloe is starting to forget where the lines of reality and fiction are. Great update and worth the wait. Can't wait for the next update.

I agree! Update Soon!