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    Re: Deep in the Bottle (NC-17) (updated 3/19/2008)

    That was so hot, this shows that Chlex can always be hot whether they are in love or absolutely hate each other. It's great to see Chloe appreciated and even greater when it's Lex who is doing the appreciating. Figures, he'd go into this thinking it would go one way and get completely floored by Chloe. I love how she knew just how to play him. I wonder in the long run what effect will this have on them. Will they be able to live with this and not let it effect their lives? Will they want to continue a sexual relationship since they are obviously happy with the outcome? Will this lead to something more? Will we get to see where this goes or is this going to end as soon as Lex walks out the door?

    I do love the aspect that Chloe knows full well who Lex is and still wanted to do this. Something that always bugged me with Lana is that we never understood where she really stood with Lex. There were times when she seemed to be cool with Lex's plans and other times when she seemed to be outraged. But with Chloe we do know that she is an essentially good person who is willing to have sex with someone she despises just because it feels good and I find that intriguing. She's not kidding herself about Lex. She doesn't think she has the power to change him. She just wants this one night with him and I say go for it because the girl deserves some quality sex. I don't think Lex really tainted Lana, there was something always tainted about that girl. She simply can not love a person because she'll always want them to be who she wants them to be and not who they really are.

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    Re: Deep in the Bottle (NC-17) (updated 3/19/2008)

    MOG this was amazing. I loved the thoughts Lex was having. His need for power yes but below the surface he feels so alone abandoned and damaged he believes he damages and taintes others. WOW your insight into his character is spot on and then his realization that Chloe knows him, sees him and is strong enough to not be "damaged" makes him feel safe and almost gives him hope that he is not poision.

    And Chloe characterization of her wanting to be "taken" not wanting to have to give and give and give, but expecting and hoping by just being "taken" she will be valued and wanted and pleasured. What an interestering look at both their characters. well done the scene was smoking hot to boot. I hope you continue with this story and have Chloe and Lex deal with some possible repercussions or at least acknowledge each other in a new way. Dagney

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    Re: Deep in the Bottle (NC-17) (last updated Dec. 22, 2007)

    WOW HOT. Can't wait for more!!!!!!

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    Love the angry sex!
    A fantastic chapter!
    I want more!!

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    Re: Deep in the Bottle (NC-17) (updated 3/19/2008)

    I'm so happy that you updated this fic. It's one of my favorites!

    Finally they had sex, and it was super HOT!!!(like the rest of this fic). I can't wait to find out what happens now, the morning after? Will they still want each other? What if Clark finds out?

    All I know is that I'm Looking forward to reading more!!!
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    Re: Deep in the Bottle (NC-17) (updated 3/19/2008)

    Oh thank goodness, you updated. Thank you, thank you, thank you!

    I was terrified that this would become an abandoned fic and it was just too good, too engrossing not be given it's due. You rule!

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    Re: Deep in the Bottle (NC-17) (updated 3/19/2008)

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    DANG!! That was HOT!!! I am still on fire. I hope this is just round one and round two of hot sex is coming...
    Damn straight. Whoo! That was amazingly hot!!

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    Re: Deep in the Bottle (NC-17) (updated 3/19/2008)

    ROTFL! Thanks for that, AmazingApe. This was an AWESOME, amazing update filled with intense psychological insights and twists to Lex and Chloe’s personalities. I loved every sentence, and I’m so glad to see it’s being continued again.

    He'd always wanted to shut her smart mouth for a change. And he had absolutely no complaints about this current method. He threw his head back as her mouth enveloped him. No. He had no complaints at all, as it was. So he closed his mouth. He had the abject fear that if he said a word, she'd either stop or do some sort of permanent damage. Maybe the latter was her plan all along. At the moment, he was nearly more on board with that than with her stopping. When he was this hard, reason, even self-preservation, took a back seat.
    ROTFL! You have to admire Lex’s priorities over here. Who would have believed that the secret to successfully killing (or at least permanently maiming) Lex Luthor was to offer him a blow job, LOL! Then again, I think it’s only CHLOE that Lex would be willing to get this desperate for when it comes to sexual favours under any and all circumstances. There was ample suggestion in earlier chapters about how this the is the most intense, exciting sexual encounter Lex has had in years.

    He wondered if she'd even admit it. How good the danger tasted. No. She probably wouldn't. When this was over, she'd probably lament over alcohol and what it made her do. But he'd know. Because it was more than cold comfort here, more than sex mingled with the freedom of hate. It was the danger of a line crossed. He'd spent his entire life dacing on that line, toying with the space beyond it. The experiments, the freaks. It was all for the common good, really, but there were times when it wasn't even about that. To subdue someone powerful, with abilities he couldn't imagine was so... Well, in the end, it was all about the common...
    It’s fascinating to see how Lex’s brain is going several hundred miles a minute, even at a desperate, confusing and intense moment like this one. It’s REALLY interesting to see how Lex is reaching to see parallels and connections between himself and Chloe Sullivan. He’s nearly frantic to prove that, at the core of her, she is as dubiously moral as him.

    She was good at this. If there was anything her relationship with Jimmy had given her, it was this. To be honest, she'd often move on to the oral quickly, nearly exhausted from his efforts to please her. It never really worked, no matter how eagerly he tried. The blow job was just a quick end to things. Jimmy fell into a dead sleep after an orgasm. She hated to admit it, but she had been glad of it. Sex was work. It was a constant mental effort to keep her mind on Jimmy and off... Clark. She could admit it. If she was low enough to suck off Lex Luthor, then her Clark fixation was nearly nothing.
    It was just sad and pitiful getting the details of her lacklustre sex-life with Jimmy. Chloe is such a passionate, desirable woman… and it feels like a vile CRIME that she wasn’t able to enjoy good sex with a partner who was worthy of her. Even worse, she’s come to believe that she’ll never attract a partner who can offer her anything between than Jimmy. At least Lex will raise her standards when it comes to being so accepting about poor performance.

    Strangely, she didn't feel low or ashamed. Lex may have started this, but she'd made the decision to finish it. Maybe she should finish it now, like with Jimmy. Just finish him off. It would end here. She came. Then he came. End of story.

    And no one had to know.
    I was glad to see that Chloe is fully in control of the situation here… which includes control over herself and her sense of identity and self-worth. Later on, she’s not going to feel ashamed about what she’s done, and she’s not going to allow herself to feel victimized. Excellent!

    Would he want the world to know this had happened? No. And she'd want it even less.

    For him, it was about power. Everything was. And he'd handed her that power. If she pulled away now, he wasn't sure he could stop himself from begging this tiny blonde to not stop... never stop... That would be a sad thing to have spread around.
    Heh, I didn’t imagine this angle, but it makes sense that Lex would also not want people to know about his sudden ‘banging of bodies’ with Chloe Sullivan. It might be humiliating for her, but it would be pretty embarrassing for him to remember (and admit) about how desperate he was for her.

    Defiled.

    He liked the word, the way it whispered through his mind with a dark sort of promise.

    He let one hand slip downward to her shoulder. It was slightly slick, even on such a cold night. His hand slid down to her shoulder blade, but could go no lower, not unless he wanted to interrupt her actions. He wished he could slide his hands all over her now, defiling every inch of skin with his touch. That's what he did. He defiled, he tainted, he took something sweet and pure and turned it into... into what he'd made Lana.
    You’re brilliant, AmazingApe. This was a perfect way to capture Lex’s paradoxical, contradicting nature. I loved the way that he seems to be filled both with despair as well as dark triumph over the way he ‘defiles and taints’ everything he touches.

    He looked down, saw her eyes, wide-open and boring into his. That was the difference here. Chloe knew. She'd always known what he was. Lana had stared wide-eyed at him, thinking he would be... Well, Clark, really. And Chloe knew that he wasn't. He was no boyscout of a farmer. And Chloe knew it. She wouldn't change. Not over him. Not over anybody. Not even Clark.
    I LOVED this, I loved how Lex realized that Chloe was not the least bit like Lana. She was a strong willed individual filled with great intelligence and passion, and she wasn’t about to let Lex Luthor sway or twist her identity.

    He didn't want her to, not really, and it was a startling realization. It broke something inside him. Underneath her hard shell was something good. Something that couldn't be tainted. He let his hand tangle in her hair. Not a push -- More of a caress. He didn't mean it to be, but it was.

    A thank you. Because she could touch him, knowing what he was, what he knew he'd be. Maybe being this close to coming was clouding him, but... That someone so untainted would touch him...
    Oh WOW! And the epiphanies keep on hitting. This was an amazing conclusion to see Lex come to. I was ecstatic to see Lex acknowledge Chloe’s passion, intelligence and strength, and then realize that it’s the part of her that he finds most attractive and intriguing.

    Not only that, but Lex actually realized what a wonderful and fantastic person… to the extent where he’s actually realized how unworthy he is of her, and he’s grateful for her being willing to be with her.

    And oh dear… ROTFLMAO! Lex is falling into his old trap of falling in love with the blink of an eye. He’s gotten into the habit of being with such horrible, vapid, uninteresting women… the result being that whenever he’s with a woman who shows even the slightest sign of decency, kindness and intelligence… he ends up falling madly in love with them.

    She pushed him off, confused and disturbed at the change in him. "No. Don't say please. That's not what you do." It wasn't. He took, she struggled, he still took. Maybe he cajoled a little in between, but it was still taking. She just wanted him to take. She didn't want to give herself to him. That was something she could never do. She wanted to take, too, claim every second of this as something she'd done that was just for her. It wasn't for the good of the world. It was just because it felt fucking good. And it wasn't helping Clark or Lana or Jimmy.
    heh, Lex has a habit of falling in love far too easily… usually to point of obsession. But let’s not forget that Chloe also has a tendency to letting her emotions sweep her away. She’s seriously disconcerted seeing this soft, gentle and vulnerable side of Lex. And I thing most of her horror comes from seeing how she’s ‘softening’ up to Lex, and she knows about the danger she’s in of becoming emotionally invested in him.

    But his eyes, so suddenly soft and pleading... It wasn't how this was supposed to go. This was supposed to be fucking and hate and rough, uncaring hands. Not soft touches or pleading eyes. "I'm having second thoughts, Lex." She moved back, let herself sink to the bed as it hit the backs of her knees. "Why don't we just call it a night?"

    He stared at her, his mouth hanging open. It would be amusing on anyone but him. "What the hell are you..."

    His eyes were narrowed now, angry. "This is just wrong," she cut in. "You and me." She pulled the covers up over her breasts. "I just can't..."

    "The fuck you can't," he growled, bending over her, pulling the covers away, grasping her thighs and pulling her to the edge of the bed. She let him. This was how this was supposed to go. It was what he had promised her. Freedom and pleasure and not giving a fuck about tomorrow.

    She grasped his shoulder, digging her nails in slightly. She smiled slightly. "Maybe I can if you stop being such a wuss."
    ROTFLMAO! Oh that clever witch! It was fascinating how Chloe found this situation tolerable only if Lex displayed and ‘reassured her’ that he was a heartless, selfish, grasping, greedy bastard who takes whatever he wants and damn the consequences to everyone else. But if he shows any sign of gentleness and generosity, then she would have to start thinking of him as human, and she might end up feeling some kind of connection to him… or at least feel guilty about using him like an expensive sex-toy.

    This was a fantastic psychological twist give to Chloe. And I loved the she handled her difficult moment by goading Lex into showing only the side of himself that she wants to see. VERY nicely done, AmazingApe.

    He smiled, too, though his eyes were still narrowed. "You're such a bitch," he murmured, leaning down. She let him kiss her this time. A rough meeting of lips as he pulled her thighs wider, settling between them, probing at her. She took the hand from his shoulder, letting her nails scrape down his chest before reachig between their bodies, reaching for his cock.
    ROTFL! And I adored how her psychological and emotional manipulation was done so skilfully that Lex had no idea what she was doing or what she was so afraid of. He just thought she was being a teasing witch, ROTFL! Perfect!

    There was a moment of fear and doubt, even combined with the urgency. She was about to let Lex Luthor's cock inside her. A part of her whispered barely intelligible warnings that flitted through her mind. The louder part was screaming to do it. Do it now. Or she never would. She met his eyes, wide and almost scared. They must be mirroring her own. How scary was this?

    Like in almost every instance in her life, for better or worse, she responded to fear with insolence. She shifted, positioning him as her eyes held his.
    Heh, it seems like she’s traded one fear for another. But it resulted in THIS, so I can’t complain, lol! Wasn’t it ironic that Chloe overcame her fear for forming a connection with Lex, and she covered up for her fear by distracting him with greater intimacy? Beautifully done, AmazingApe!

    He looked down, then back up at her, his gaze almost questioning. She closed her eyes. She wasn't giving out permission tonight. He would or he wouldn't. She breathed deep, waiting. She nearly wondered if there was some shred of nobility in him. Would he pull away and apologize and gather his clothes, guilt weighing him down? She often fantasized about Clark up to this point. This is when he'd usually cry off, leaving her aching and alone. This was a hard point to get past, even in her wildest dreams. Then again, this wasn't Clark - a point that was made even clearer when he shoved inside hard, in no way going easy on her. Really, she should have expected nothing less.

    Her eyes flew open and her hands clutched at the bedding. She stared at the ceiling a moment, adjusting to the shock and the mild pain, before letting her eyes drift back to him. His were closed, his mouth partially open, slightly uneven breaths whispering against her lips.
    LOL! Did Chloe really find herself wondering whether Lex was going to hold himself back from doing something he wanted because he was too noble? I guess that moment of temporary insanity was immediately dispelled, ROTFL!

    Although, the truth is that Lex is capable of great honour and nobility, but ONLY towards people that he loves. He would do anything for a person that he feels any form of affection for. Chloe is definitely in the ‘enemy’ category, which means that, no matter how high a regard and respect he might have for her, he’s not going to show her mercy.

    He opened his eyes, then. They were slightly wide and unfocused before they returned to half-mast, bringing with them the smirk that always seemed so at home on his lips. "I'm sorry, Sullivan. It's obviously been a while for you. You want me to be gentle?"
    LOL! In a funny way, I think Lex wanted to sincerely ascertain whether Chloe was all right… but it figures that he would put a mocking tone on even a sincere question born from genuine concern. He didn’t want to seem weak by showing too much concern for her.

    Her lips formed a thin line as she pushed up against him. A while. It hadn't been that long. Was he implying she didn't know how to fuck? Because she knew... mostly. She obviously knew more than she thought she did, because her movements wiped the smirk off his face as he grunted out "Shit! Fucking tight."

    Was she? She really didn't know how she measured up, considering she'd only been with Jimmy. But that didn't mean she didn't know what to do. She was a bona-fide expert at getting it over with. She pushed up again, squeezing him inside her.

    He cursed, bringing one hand to her hips, pushing them down. He met her eyes again. "Yeah. Got it."
    ROTFL! Of course Chloe is not going to hear the concern in Lex’s question, she only heard the mockery. It was VERY interesting that Chloe’s idea of ‘good sex’ is only to get it ‘over and done with’ as soon as possible. Jimmy REALLY short-changed her, and he messed up views about what to expect from a partner. At least in this regard, this sexual encounter with Lex is going to do her a WORLD of good.

    I loved how Chloe was just focused on getting Lex off, but Lex took it as a demand and a challenge for him to hurry up and get working! LOL! Brillaint!

    She didn't get to ask him what exactly he got because he started moving then. A moan tore itself from her mouth as he scraped and thrust inside her. As much as she was a expert at getting it over with, she wasn't quite sure what to do here. This was good. This felt... "Ungh! God..." Yeah. This was new.

    He groaned deeply into her mouth now and she felt herself pulling at his neck, taking his groans in, joining her own with his as he pulled almost all the way out before plunging back in, their pelvises connecting almost painfully. That was good, too. Then, he was drawing back and thrusting into her now in a pounding, jarring rhythm and it was even better. A part of her wanted to analyze even that. Why was it so good? Was it the hate? Was it the danger? Maybe it was just that someone with as many notches on his belt as Lex probably knew what he was doing.

    Of course, thinking just took away from it. She was happy to let her mind stop and let her body just... "Yessss," she hissed as her eyes slid shut.

    There was no room for thinking here.
    Oh that was HOT!!! I can see Chloe’s mind is expanding when it comes to experience and knowledge about sex. She’s NEVER going to settle for bad sex ever again.

    God, he was trying. He was trying to just give it to her, get her coming again, focus on getting Chloe Sullivan off with his cock deep inside her. Then these feelings would go away, this strange and unwelcome... gratitude.
    awesome! Lex is falling for Chloe even as we watch! I knew that he wasn’t going to be able to get out of this without developing some kind of a connection to her, but I didn’t anticipate that his feelings for her would grow so intense! It’s wonderful to see.

    He wasn't grateful to be fucking her. He wasn't. In fact, she was wrong about who owed who. Chloe Sullivan owed him a good fuck for all the data mining, for all the secrets, for all the times she looked at him with disgust. Was he disgusting now? Her eyes were closed. He didn't want that. He needed to see.

    "Look at me," he grunted, even as his hips kept pumping into her.

    She didn't. Her eyes squeezed shut harder as her face contorted.

    He stilled. "Fucking look at me."
    LOL! He’s really reaching to try and regain his equilibrium when it comes to Chloe Sullivan. But he’s right to be suspicious about who Chloe might be imagining when she closes her eyes. Chloe actually WAS trying to imagine him as a mindless, faceless sex toy when this started. She was trying to completely ignore the fact that she was fucking Lex Luthor, and trying to pretend that it was just a ‘convenient hot body’ she was getting ready to enjoy.

    But I’m quite sure she’s aware that she’s having sex with Lex Luthor now.

    She did, then, her eyes almost angry as they bore into his. "Don't you dare stop," she panted.

    But he did, staying still, searching her face as it changed again.

    "Lex... please..."

    Desperation. Chloe Sullivan was desperate for him to f*ck her. Didn't that just beat all?
    I really enjoyed seeing Lex begging Chloe earlier, but I LOVED how both Lex and Chloe are on equal footing now. It makes the connection between them all the more real.

    In a perfect world, he'd stop here. She could know what it was like to be shut out like he'd been. It would teach her, teach all of them. If only she wasn't so f*cking hot and tight and... He started moving again, unable not to. In seconds, he wasn't sure why he had even stopped. Her thighs were sliding up to his waist. Her head thrashing against the bed. The nails on her free hand were digging into his sides... and it hurt like a bitch.
    ROTFL! Poor Lex, it must have really hurt to see the perfect opportunity to destroy one of his most challenging enemies, only to face up to the fact that he was too ‘weak’ to take advantage of this moment. I loved how he finds Chloe too irresistible… so much that he will put aside his competitive, vengeful nature aside for her.

    He grasped her wrist, pulling it up and above her head to join the other where they almost dangled off the bed. He realized that his knees were on the floor, that his pants were still around his ankles, and that she was slipping forward, nearly pushing him off what purchase he had on the bed, sideways as they were. He couldn't care less at the moment. He held her wrists tight, keeping his position, their position, as he jerked his hips forward.

    She was almost whimpering now. He shut his mouth tight. He didn't want to let it out. Let her be the one who was...

    "Oh, fuck," he breathed as she tightened around him, fairly fluttered around him. Her insides gripping and vibrating around his cock. It was good. Too good. He was nearly worried he'd come just short of her when she suddenly rose up off the bed, her body bending upwarss, stiffening as a hot surge of wetness coated him inside her. It was the end for him. He followed, collapsing on her lightly shuddering chest, his hips jerking spasmodically as he emptied inside her.
    Oh dear heavens, that was hot, Hot, HOT!!! That was beautifully written smut, AmazingApe. Oh dear, but there was no condom! Chloe is probably on the pill and ‘safe’ from that danger… but Lex is… well… let’s be honest… he’s a sl*t who will sleep with anything that catches his eye. It’s probably not a good idea for anyone to enjoy a one-night stand with him unless he’s covered from head to toe in triple layer latex.

    I’m drooling in anticipation for the next chapter. We’re going to see the ‘after-glow’ of this encounter, and I can’t wait to see how it goes. Are the two of them going to admit to that connection that ‘suddenly formed up’ between them? Or perhaps they’ll realize that it’s a conection that has been forming for a long time now, and has only intensified to a new level tonight?

    Heh, at the very least, I’m hoping that they will both acknowledge that the sex was better than anything they have experienced with anyone else. I think Lex was more screwed over by this encounter than Chloe was. I firmly believe that she’ll eventually be be able to find herself a partner who will satisfy her as much as Lex does. But Lex… I don’t think he’s EVER going to find another intense, passionate, fantastic lover like her ever again.

    Aaargh! I’m dying to know what’s going to happen next. Please update soon, AmazingApe!

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    Re: Deep in the Bottle (NC-17) (updated 3/19/2008)

    i love it please keep going!!!! that was just so HOT!!!!!!!!!

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    Re: Deep in the Bottle (NC-17) (updated 3/19/2008)

    Hottest. Chlex. Ever.

    Love this fic...thanks for leaving you fandom to write this.

    It's really a shame the show doesn't make the most of the chemistry that these characters and actors have. I'm glad to see Chlex could still work in a hot, and totally twisted way, even with all the crappy cannon that's around.

    Please update some more

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