Deserted (NC-17)

[campbti]

Haven't read this in years. But I thought of it the other day and just had to come on and find it and reread. I really like the interesting turns this thing takes and I love all their interactions especially early on and when the children are born. Really great work...

[gecko]

great story, loved it from beginning to end

[westwingwolf]

I love to re-read this story because it has so many great moments like when Chloe and Lex first admit their feelings; Chloe tells Lex she's pregnant; when cloneLex finds them and Chloe threatens to kill him if he doesn't take them to hospital; the discussion about not going back to Smallville. I love their life with Julian and Joshua and Og, and even Luthor gets to keep his life. Great story all around!

[chicablue]

Great story!

[Lel]

What a fantastic story. I cannot believe that I have not seen this before. I loved the unique idea and thought that you wrote this brilliantly.

Lel

[emms14]

Aww what a sweet ending to such a fantastic story! Great job and great "what if" idea!!

-emms14

[Sarah77]

I have read this so many times it's ridiculous. I absolutely love it!
It's so cool that Lex wasn't alone on the island.

[donhisiewen]

Beautiful fic! How I wish this was the series' ending in real life. I read it in one go.

I imagined Helen was eaten by sharks but halfway through their meal, she gave them indigestion so that's why there was still half of her that Chloe found.

[stampiej]

Great fic!

[sjww]

Have to say a big thank you to Lexie for helping a newbie find some truly amazing stories on here...

I really loved this story so much so I got reading last night and carried on till 2am this morning when sleep won the battle..just finished now and wow totally hooked .....too much to comment on but loved the knowing each other/friendship/then love transition that took place and the way you wrote it.... just wonderful...