Deserted (NC-17)

[Brittany]

:biggrin: Yes,yes this friendship stuff is great but when do we get to the smut? I enjoyed this chapter just as I enjoyed all the others, but I'd enjoy it even more if there was smut! Please update soon! Did I mention I want smut?

[Tandy]

:yay: Friendship is a start, hopefully to something with a lot more smut! : Honestly, you're doing a wonderful job setting their relationship. MORE!

Tandy

[drina]

Guess they're going crazy with cabin fever...what can they do?

[scorpio]

Aww. What a good chapter. I like their friendship. I really do.
And...I can´t belive I´m saying that but there´s no need to rush with the smut. :huh: Did I just say that? :lol: Oh, but you´re welcome to give us some sexual tension, though.

[celticangel]

Aww their friends. Can't wait for the next part. Update soon. :worship2:

[Val]

Aww that was such a cute ch.!
More! :biggrin:

[TestingFaith]

ok...this is GREAT...i wanna see more soon


Did ya see the scary-ass-monkey segment after Pirates of the Caribbean?
Lily M. :sunny:

[bluemoongirl23]

Yeah, "friends" I buy that one. Well, they'll start out that way then. I love it when I get two updates for the price of one! Great stuff. I love Lex holding Chloe as she sleeps and his carefullness at not freaking her out. And, then, of course, their banter is wonderful as always.

Blue

[hfce]

Friends sure :lol:


Hope :chlexsign2:

[roslyn]

ok, now i like smut about as much as the next person, but i have to say i really like how your building this strong fiundation for the two of them to stand on. first them realzing they have much in common, then the beginning of a friendship, it makes their relationship as a couple more sensible because they got to know each other before they jumped into the bed together. :biggrin:

by the way, loved this chapter and i can't wait for the next so update really soon!

Roslyn