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    Wow the sitting and riding comment :yay: was awsome
    wonderful job you do so please update soon :worship2:

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    This story is so hilarious and great! I laughed so much after the first chapter that my roomy wanted to read. I like they way you are writing all of the characters. Lana (not that I care for her) is not necessarily OOC, other than her Clark issues and all the dead people in her life we don’t know much about her. Gabe seems like a very understanding and cool dad.

    Can’t wait to see what happens at the party! Sounds like Lana was foreshadowing when she said
    "Who knows, maybe we might even get lucky."

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    This story is so funny. Can't wait for the next part. :yay: :yay:

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    A/N: Enh! *rubs temples* I meant to update this sooner but I have a guest who likes to deprive me of sleep (in the bad way) and I swear to the higher beings if I wake up one more morning gasping for breath because he pinches my nose shut I'm going to wrap my hands around his scrawny little neck and shake for all he's worth. So here goes. Hopefully I'll be updating much quicker now.

    Chapter 4: Surprise!

    Chloe and Lana met Gabe at the elevator. It was a four story ride to the soiree and Chloe was grinning madly at the thought of all she and Lana could do to capture someone's attention. A certain someone. A bald someone. As the elevators parted and they stepped in, Gabe finally realized what his daughter was wearing.

    "Chloe," He hush whispered, "Don't you think that's just a little too revealing." Chloe turned to him and frowned.

    "No..." her voice trailed off as Lex also got into the elevator. "I love my body daddy, and i think this dress is perfect."

    Beside her Lana practically purred and stroked her hand down Chloes back, "I do too." She agree. Chloe tossed a beaming smile over her shoulder at the great pretender.

    "Thank you sweetie." Lana winked and Lex shifted uncomfortably in front of them. 'Is someone a bit uncomfy?' Chloe grinned broadly at the thought of how uncomfortable he would be by the end of the night. And how he would have to remedy himself of that situation.

    As the doors opened once again Gabe led the two girl through the crowd, introducing them. "Chloe, Lana, this is Mr. Alcott. He's in charge of product management." Chloe smiled as if she were fascinated. Lana nodded her head a little too much and looked as though she were giving herself whiplash.

    Mr. Alcott eyed the pair up and down, his dark brown eyes raking over their bodies. Chloe noticed this action and elbowed Gabe. "Well, Mr. Sullivan, you are a lucky lucky man. Two beautiful women escorting you here tonight. Mind if I borow the blonde when you're done with her?" Lana's eyes widened almost comically and Chloe's fists began to ball up, if that man didn't take his eyes out of her cleavage this instant she would...

    "EXCUSE ME?" Gabe had lost it. Completely lost it. "THAT IS MY DAUGHTER..." All the heads turned their way and Chloe took her father's arm, "That is my daughter you sick fuck." he finished in barely a whisper.

    Mr. Alcott simply shrugged. His eyes raked once over Lana and he he arched a brow at her. "Then I suppose I can make do with the wafe." Chloe's mouth dropped open and before she knew it, her fist flew into his mouth.

    "Ow, Shit." She shook her hand out and winced at the red knuckles already starting to swell.

    "Is there a prob...WOAH, what happened to you?" Lex stood over Mr. Alcott and eyed Chloe still shaking out her hand.

    "He called Lana a wafe." Chloe defended herself from his amused look.

    "So defending her honor?" Chloe shrugged at the comment.

    "Mr. Alcott was out of line, Lex. He asked to borrow Chloe when I was done with her." Lex looked from Gabe to Chloe and then to Lana who had an empty champagne glass in her hand.

    His eyes once again fell on Chloe and she had to labor her breathing by the way his eyes appraised her. "I see, I'll have Mr. Alcott escorted up to his room. Chloe, if you'd like to press sexual harrassment charges you may do so with security, and Gabe...watch out for this one." He pat Lana's head just as she grabbed another glass from a passing tray and had put the empty one down.

    "What a nasty old man." Lana looked down at the squirming man. "Let's dance." She grabbed Chloe's hand with her free one and led her to the dance floor.

    Chloe and Lana reached the dancefloor as soon as a slow song came on and Lana leaned fully into Chloe. She tried to remember seeing her friend drink anything else but the only time she saw Lana with alcohol, both glasses had been empty. She definitely had a feeling that Lana had drunk more than two if it was any concilation that she was now snoring softly against Chloe's cleavage. She shot her father an SOS. He narrowed his eyes at his daughter and helped her drag/carry Lana to the bathroom. Halfway through the crowd Lana decided to wake up, her arms flailed around trying to get free of her assailants. It was then that the waiter passed with a full tray of champagne and Lana's hand hit it at an angle. Every single glass aimed at Chloe and flew through the air. She felt a few glasses hit her, nothing broke. Until of course it hit the ground. She didn't have to look down to know that her dress was a bit more clingy that she had thought it would be tonight.

    Lex watched from the corner of the room. The white dress that hugged her curves, plastered against her bare breasts, he saw every outline of her body hidden beneath the dress. She rolled her eyes at him and continued helping Lana towards the exit. Her father decided it would be best to take her roomie to the bathroom since Lana was now completely awake and ready to blow chunks. In the bathroom Lana held her own hair with one hand, the other one bracing the toilet seat to keep it from spinning like a frisbee and taking off from the toilet.
    Chloe, on the other hand, decided it was Lex's fault. His lackey's should have been carding people at the door or something embarrassing like that. But no, he had employees that knew how to distribute alcohol to minors. And then he had looked at her. And she knew that her dress hid absolutely nothing from her straps to her waist. The bottom half of her dress was only sprinkled. The heated look in his eyes had her going crazy. She wanted to go to him so bad, but she had to make him come to her. It would have to work out like that. She went into the stall beside Lana's and shed her white lace crotchless panties, making sure no one could see anything too detailed without them covering certain parts of her.

    Sticking the wadded up panties into her tiny purse she helped Lana clean herslef up and moved to stand beside her, one arm wrapped around her back. Lana's head fell to the side and onto Chloe's shoulder. "Shanksh." Chloe smiled and made her way to the elevator telling her dad she could handle this simple task on her own. She wanted to perch Lana against the wall and trot over to Lex, possibly stash the undies in his pants pocket. She couldn't find him roaming her eyes across the crowd so she gave up and hauled Lana into the elevator.

    "She okay?" Chloe turned, nearly whacking Lana's head against the metal sides of the elevator.

    "I think she'll be okay when she wakes up." lex gave her a disbleiving look and at the next floor Chloe was scooted back into the corner with Lex, and a passed out brunette weighing her down. Seeing no time like the present she leaned lana against the wall and they shot past their room floor to the tenth floor.She leveled Lana against the wall slightly and one handedly opened her purse and transferred the panties, safely from one to the other.
    When the cart jerked to a stop at the next floor, returning back down Chloe leaned into him, taking advantage of being knocked off her feet by the sudden pull of gravity. When they finally stopped at the fourth floor Lex moved around to help Chloe carry Lana to their room. He was surprised to find it not beside his, but down the hall towards the other end. Chloe swiped the keycard and pushed her way through the door dropping Lana off on the bed. She unbuckled the brunette's shoes and then the other when she realized he wasn't leaving.

    "You never seen a woman undress another woman before?"

    Lex shook his head silently. Eye trained hard on her fingers. Chloe led him to the door. "Thanks for helping me get her back to safety."

    "No problem." His retreating back nearly made her cackle with laughter, him being so oblivious to the article of clothing he had secretly stashed in his pants.

    "Hey, LEX!" Her voice echoed in the hallway just as he turned to get back on the elevator. His head peeked around the corner. "I left you a surprise. Left pants pocket." She shut the hotel room door and slid down it. Her wet dress still clung to her like a second skin. Her voice raising in laughter.

    *~*

    Lex reached his hand in his pocket and immediately felt the tiny wad of lace. Too many holes for panties, definitely not a bra. The elevator sign dinged at every floor. Lex took the material from his pocket and slowly unravelled it. He held up a pair of crtochless panties in front of him. Just as he was contemplating getting back on the elevator the doors opened and several rather large and elderly people got out. He turned on his heel and bolted to the door of his hotel. She was definitely going to be the death of him, no doubt about it. Lex sucked in a sharp breath when he realized that she had been completely naked beside him in the elevator. Her wet dress forming its molding around her breast. And her underwear in his pocket.

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    Heehee, poor Lex, nothing he can do against the will of Chloe. More soon!

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    :biggrin: That was another great ch - Chloe is a minx and no mistake! Now that no-one is holding your nose closed - UPDATE SOON! Please?

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    LMAO!

    Okay, he must have been pretty out of it (otherwise engaged in his thoughts of Chloe no doubt) to not even notice that there was something in his pants pocket.

    Love this fic. It just keeps getting better and better.

  8. #48
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    i'm sorry, is it just me or is Lana going a little overboard with the whole charade thing? I am crazy aren't i? OH well! :biggrin:
    Love it, so update soon!
    ~Deidre~

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    That was so good. :lol: more please... :biggrin:


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    scifichick774
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    Originally posted by petriebird18@Jul 21 2003, 02:41 PM
    i'm sorry, is it just me or is Lana going a little overboard with the whole charade thing?
    Er... not just you. Wonder if she's harboring unrequited feelings for her friend?

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