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    Re: Tatters (NC-17)

    Greast story!

    I LOLd at this:

    “Explain, please.” Lex’s tone brooked no argument and caused her to sigh.

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    Re: Tatters (NC-17)

    I've been greatly remiss in thanking everyone for the feedback, so... Thank You!!!

    It still a bit of editing here and there, which I will get round too at some point. I was a tad nervous about sharing something written so quickly, but you've allayed those pesky fears, and I promise to try and come up with more off-the-cuff slices of smut in future!

    Hugs, S xxx

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    Re: Tatters (NC-17)

    love it so sexy and funny.

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    *giggles* That was too funny... I loved it! I think Chloe still should wear the new clothes even though she would be only wearing them once, Lex can totally afford it, he's super rich! lol Fantastic story!!

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    Lex never used to be a breast man. It was always a good pair of legs and a firm ass. Then he’d been introduced to Chloe Land and the wonders a pair of full, rounded boobs could do.
    LOL!!! This was a perfect combination of funny and hot!!!

    Rocio

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    How did I miss this fic? I love it the smut was great.
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    That was a great story. Nice way to think on your feet. I liked your imagery and how your story tied together completely. Great job!

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    I loved this story! So clever! I love it when the ending takes me by surprise.

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    Re: Tatters (NC-17)

    Lmao that was cute
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