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    cute fic. i didn't really like to see lex cry in front of his dad but oh well. everything was perfect as always.

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    Re: Payback Time ( PG ) Updated 4/18

    That was a great story! Thank you!
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    Re: Payback Time ( PG ) Updated 4/18

    Amazing, I loved it so much! Brilliant. They were so sweet together although they went through so much pain. Poor Chloe losing eveything and having to have surgery. Now, here is my problem. I feel that Lionel got off far too easily after killing Chloe's Daddy (I am a Daddy's girl) and as such I would like to know, is there any possibility that after the conclusion of this story he fell into a machine that will keep him alive for a thousand years burning his skin off forever? Is there? Pllleeeeeeeeeease!!!!!!!!!!

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    Re: Payback Time ( PG ) Updated 4/18

    Quote Originally Posted by HotCrossedBunny View Post
    Amazing, I loved it so much! Brilliant. They were so sweet together although they went through so much pain. Poor Chloe losing eveything and having to have surgery. Now, here is my problem. I feel that Lionel got off far too easily after killing Chloe's Daddy (I am a Daddy's girl) and as such I would like to know, is there any possibility that after the conclusion of this story he fell into a machine that will keep him alive for a thousand years burning his skin off forever? Is there? Pllleeeeeeeeeease!!!!!!!!!!
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    Good story could have been a bit longer but I liked it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by missmagick View Post
    Good story could have been a bit longer but I liked it.
    Glad you enjoyed it.

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    Re: Payback Time (PG)

    Logged back on after years of not logging in and stumbled across this. Wonderful story. Great job. Lexie
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    Re: Payback Time ( PG ) Updated 4/18

    Lovely story! I really enjoyed it!

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    Re: Payback Time (PG)

    Very interesting start!
    Thanks so much for sharing!

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    Re: Payback Time ( PG )

    Like the fact that Lex isn't going to know it's her right away. Very interested to read their interactions.
    Thanks for sharing!

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