Paying The Price (Completed) Pg13

**SinnerSaint** · 7th November 2003, 11:35

I like it ! I like it alot ! Lex is my hero !!

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[COLOR=blue]Forgiveness is the only thing you earn after its been given to you.

**starmoon** · 29th April 2005, 07:33

that was great and i would like a sequel were clark tries to hurt lex or something like that but he fails and lex and chloe have a happy life together and mabe start a family.

**Baily007** · 29th April 2005, 07:46

That was great! I especially like how you create the realization that it was Clark who hit her. GREAT JOB!

**Tanschana** · 12th August 2008, 02:21

Wow!
Verrrry nice!

**Reese** · 12th August 2008, 04:02

Clark on the red meteorite hurts Chloe (who he was dating at the time?), Lex saves her and then Clark wants revenge. Interesting.

At first, I thought you had it as just Clark who had hurt her and I wasn't so sure but I was able to get on board once you brought the BigBadRed into it. And an interesting way to drive a wedge between Chloe and Clark.

**~*~Tasha~*~** · 3rd October 2009, 21:40

I'd love to see Clark have to really pay for his lies and actions. He thinks that everyone should just forgive him for everything, because he didn't mean it. That's bull. So it was red kryptonite ... that doesn't mean everyone should just forget the dangers of it. His lies always got to me too. He said Lex had no right to "do the wrong things for the right reasons" yet Clark did that all the time.