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    Re: "Fragile" *Deleted scene* 1/1 PG-13

    Please sequel please..


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    Re: "Fragile" *Deleted scene* 1/1 PG-13

    Quote Originally Posted by kimbo
    Thanks though i was kind of thinking of making a short story of this..kind of like sequel futerfic. ten years down the line..what do you think?
    YESSSSSS!!!

    That sounds like a wonderful idea. I would love to read that. Please post soon.

    PS. I think smut is required in the next story due to the following quote.
    Had let her kiss him into submission before fucking her in his study and in his bed for hours. She remembered when he had dropped her off at her dorm in the middle of the night. Had kissed her forehead and lips while she tried hard not to comment on the look of guilt in his eyes as he said he’ll see her later.
    You have to explain a little more about this.

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    Re: "Fragile" *Deleted scene* 1/1 PG-13

    Oh wow, this was so good. I loved it!

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    Re: "Fragile" *Deleted scene* 1/1 PG-13

    Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!

    Oh, don't mind me, just trying to be subliminal. Is it working?

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    Re: "Fragile" *Deleted scene* 1/1 PG-13

    what a strange question !! of course we want a sequel!!!
    Really i like how you write! continue yur good work!!!!!

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    Re: "Fragile" *Deleted scene* 1/1 PG-13

    I loved how Chloe told him off. That was great.This scene was much better then the one on the show. I hope Lex realizes how much of a fool he was for choseing Lana over Chloe.
    I loved how Chloe realized that it was she that had won and not Lana. Thanks for writting it. A sequel would be great!

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    Re: "Fragile" *Deleted scene* 1/1 PG-13

    So very sad. Well written, but very sad.

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    Re: "Fragile" *Deleted scene* 1/1 PG-13

    OMG Lex is so stupid
    But I loved Chloe, that's it girl... Lana didn't win, you did

    And please please please make a sequel
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    Absolutely fantastic! I loved the way you ended it in such a realistic way, and yeah it was real sad but it also really suited the storyline!

    I think a sequel would be really good. You left it at an open position for anything to happen really! Like continuing on the day, or 10 years later.

    But what ever you write if you are going to do a sequel will be amazing! Just please please please continue this story!

    Please?

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    Re: "Fragile" *Deleted scene* 1/1 PG-13

    Truly heartbraking, but beautifuly written.
    I can feel Chloe's pain but also the hope that she is strong and will move on. Just Brilliant...I Loved it!!!

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