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    This story is so intense! I think that in Lex's sick mind he actually thinks he does love her!! Poor Chloe!! She was so close to getting her life back!! :crygreen: This is a really good story!! I think you've shown the future Lex's character perfectly!! :chlexsign3:

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    mmmmmm evil Lex, gotta love it *licks lips*
    I adore the desperate mood/tone. It sets me on edge makes my heart race. :worship2:

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    hmm....i love evil!lex when chloe is bad too...but not so much when he turns on her too...and traps her like that.. :crygreen: :crygreen: it makes me sad...but it was very well writen, and the fact that most abused women do respond in that same way...they can never leave the one who hurts them the most..because they love them. :crygreen: so sad and depressing, but very good at the same time.

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    I thought she was going to get away... *shrugs* That was written well. :smoker:

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    I just love this story!! :yay: :yay2: Lex being evil while Chloe is still somewhat good even though she did some bad things is just perfect. It was great how Lex would not let Chloe leave him. She knew it would be hard to get away because he would not let her and because she still loves him. Chloe was so smart but she forgot when Lex realy wants something and finaial has it he will never let go and destroy or kill anyone and everyone in his way. Even if she did run he would find her and bring her back he might even kill who ever she made friends with and helped her. I love evil Lex and him keeping good Chloe who only partly want to be with him. Evil Lex is sexy . Chlex forever no matter what happens or who tries to get in the way because they won't. :angel: :cute:

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    Re: Can I Dance? PG-13 (Completed)

    You did very good at capturing on abused wifes persona.

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    Re: Can I Dance? PG-13 (Completed)

    I love evil Lex.

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    Re: Can I Dance? PG-13 (Completed)

    great fic love it

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    Re: Can I Dance? PG-13 (Completed)

    very good story, so in character

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    Re: Can I Dance? PG-13 (Completed)

    i'm excited to read your other fics

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