If Looks Could Kill (NC-17)

[xxasaxx]

Fantastic Ending!!!

[malugargula]

Perfect

A perfect ending for a perfect fic
I loved that she gave him the key back

[ryuu-chan]

Great story. Very intense with many twists and a nicely developing storyline. It would be even better without the constant spelling and grammar mistakes, especially in the first 10 chapters.

[tatie87]

This was such a great story. I loved the plot and the chemistry between Lex and Chloe. I loved most of all you interpretation of Lex/Chloe.

[jenwin23]

I like the story, but I feel like I should comment that you have a lot of wrong spellings and wrong word choices. For example "ever" instead of "every." I know some of it must be mis-typing - for example the pronoun confusion "he" instead of "her" or "she," but it takes me out of the story as I try to figure out what you meant as opposed to what you wrote. I'm not trying to be mean, but if no one tells you, then you have no motivation to force yourself to grow. Last example "In one last admit she pulled her self out of the place to his car to go to the apartment to get Lex." Admit? Not what you're going for here and I have no idea what word you meant to have.

[jaab]

I really like this story, have read it before, the only thing I didint like was the fact that Chloe forgave them, I mean after everything they did, and the fact that Lex got married. Well as much as I like a happy Chlex ending. I think I would have liked better if she didint forgive them and if she didint go back to Lex. Maybe its just me, but I kind of hoped that she would find herself and make a life without them. That being said, I still enjoyd the story and thought the storyline very original.

[reyeslu]

Wow, this was such an interesting ride. There were no gaps. At no point was I asking, "but, how did that happen?" It just all flowed. You had me on the Lex betrayal and rooftop dream in Japan. But I loved the happy ending. AND I just have to say I loved Loved LOVED Gabe as a badass. The way you wove in the Smallville stuff was genius. I haven't seen those episodes, but it was easy to see it happening. Thanks!

[malugargula]

Finished rereading this amazing fic
It's so good

[lia00027]

I really like this story. Good job.

[trckyrcky]

Its been a while since I read this and now that I had the chance to re-read this, I really really like the kick ass Chloe.