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    Re: Home Alone (NC-17)

    NOTE: The hacking has made the preceding posts inaccessible. Click here to read the fic in full: http://www.mediafire.com/file/g9r8c6...e%20Alone.docx

    This chapter was amazingly hot. I loved that cream that Chloe was using, and the situation was hilarious, sexy, and a little disturbing.

    I kept waiting for Lex to get some acknowledgement from Chloe that she actually wanted to do this and was not merely acting under the influence of the cream. We can assume that there is no prior relationship or even flirting between them since in the beginning Chloe was actually fantasizing about Clark and because of how he treated her in the beginning.

    I hope in the next chapter Chloe can take charge a little more so she seems more of a willing participant rather than confused about what is happening to her.

    Her dad walked Lex to the door. They shook hands. Chloe shut her eyes tight. Lex was shaking her father’s hand with the same hand that was just on her… in her… private place.
    I found this line particularly funny, but revealing. If Chloe is going to be in these adult situations, she needs to at least have a slightly more mature view of her pussy. Afterall, she had no problem using it for pleasure in the middle of her living room earlier.

    I look forward to reading the next chapter soon.
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    Re: Home Alone (NC-17)

    I thought you said the next chapter was almost finished. Will we get to read it soon?

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    Re: Home Alone (NC-17)

    loved it- and it needs an update!

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    Re: Home Alone (NC-17)

    Next Chapter Should Be Up Soon, Guys! Sorry About The Wait!

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    Re: Home Alone (NC-17)

    Quote Originally Posted by BellaMR View Post
    I thought you said the next chapter was almost finished. Will we get to read it soon?

    Folks,

    Just as an FYI, with the number of recent spammers on the board lately, Jules has put a filter on to look for specific words (usually related to sex/porn sites). Unfortunately, because this is in the NC-17 section, anything that looks like it could be spam gets sent to the moderation queue for approval before the posts are visible. So please be patient.

    Thank you.

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    Chloe's thoughts about trying to be mature and not letting Lex get to her were funny. I loved the banter between them. I also liked all the naughty things Lex said to Chloe as well as the sweet things. The smut was awesome and fun. I'm glad they will be continuing this relationship.

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    Re: Home Alone (NC-17)

    Great story!!!!
    I would love a follow up to see how the shopping trip went !!!

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    Re: Home Alone (NC-17)

    That was hot!


    great ending!

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    Re: Home Alone (NC-17)

    Loved it! Excellent story.

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    Great update. I'm glad to see that Chloe was more aggressive in this update and that they will be continuing their relationship.

    Excellant job. I look forward to reading your next fic.

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