Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*

[autumngold]

Oh, I really wish that Chloe wouldn't have left!! I'm afraid that Lex is going to be even harder to reach now!! Thank you so much for updating!! You're so sweet to post so late!! I can't wait for more!!

[Krysia]

“I’ve done things Chloe. Questionable things. Things she would never forgive me for.”

Chloe nodded, placing her hand back on his shoulder. “I know, but you’re her son, and she loves you no matter what. You’re not Lionel. Do you understand me?”

“How do you know?” He asked in a quiet voice.

Chloe smiled softly at him. “I wouldn’t be here if I thought so.”

Oh Poor Lex , remembering the aniversary of his mothers dath and being confronted with who he maight be becoming on the same day had to be painful. This , above, was my favourite part because it shows what is the real problem that is eating away at Lex and how simple is the solution for it. Although I'm hoping he won't base his faith in the fact he isn't becoming Lionel only on Chloe, because it would be unfair. And on a side note I totally love Helga

[pipersmum]

Poor Lex he probably forgot about what day it was because he was happy and looking forward to going home and seeing Chloe!! He should think about it abit more his mum would probably be delighted that for once he was so happy that he forgot what day it was!!

Chloe is right he is nothing like Lionel, but I agree with autumngold I think he is going to be even harder to reach now!!

Thanks for posting and I look forward to more soon.

[LaLa]

ooohhhh! you don't know how long i've waited last night for this part lol great as usual but i agree with autumngold, chloe shouldn't have left; now i smell angst for the next chapter argh! I want smut, I like the building of the story but damn! Lex find yourself a good shrink for us to get to the smut grrr! lol
sorry for this post, just ignore me!
...but still great!

[littlepearl]

Oh, poor Lex. It must be a hard time for him, hope that Chloe will be able to help him with all his issues .
I really liked the conversation between Lois and Chloe, really funny !
I really enjoy this fic, thanks !

[hfce]

This is not good. He will shut down even more.


Hope

[letia84]

First off poor Lex forgetting his mother died that day. Lois is to funny slot A and B LOL. She is great in this. I like a little angst smut so why did you stop there. I guess I don’t want him to be drunk when they do it the first time but man that was a tease you just wrote.

PPMS great update. Great fic.

[Kit Merlot]

This was a wrenching update.

First, Lex's obvious devastation at forgetting his Mom's death just about killed me, and then CHloe's pain at Lex's pulling away from her was hard to read, too.

And Lois is right in that Lex is afraid of hurting Chloe, and that is why he hasn't made a romantic move.

Wonderfully done!

[lj715]

NOO! Chloe , don't leave him. I think she gave up here too quickly. Oh well, please fix this . Can't wait for the next update.

[teb85]

NOO! Chloe , don't leave him. I think she gave up here too quickly. Oh well, please fix this . Can't wait for the next update.

I agree with lj she should of stayed but really looking forward to next update !!