Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*

[Kit Merlot]

You know what? Lex is growing more and more attached to Chloe, and I know that she is going to win out in the end.

Lana is just a prety little distraction--Chloe is a challenge to him

And I do like how Chloe goes right to Lois for help/solace--that's really cool!

[lj715]

Great update, like this fic so much! I really liked the conversation between Lois & Chloe. " Lane's house of sex" made me lol. I really hate how Lex just falls all over Lana. Ugh. Chloe was the first one Lex took to see the new LuthoMed site though.

Chloe & Lois have two choices as I see it. One- spike Lana's lunch with a little ecoli. That'll take care of her for a while. Two- Chloe & Lois have to devise a more intense plan for Chloe getting Lex. Maybe she has to start touching him more.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

[GivenToFly]

I am so into this story. I love how you've written the relationships so far. Chloe and Lex, Chloe and Lois...the dialogue is witty and fun, and just very natural. I can't wait to see how this progresses, especially with the latest...er, development. I would freak out over the kiss, but I figure it's just a little bump in the road, right?

Though I did freak out when I totally mis-read "Lane's house of sex" as "Lana's house of sex". Ack. Heh.

Great update

[Ann]

NO! This can't be happening! He can't be kissing Lana! Ugh, you must come back here immediately and remedy this situation!

[teb85]

OMG!! what is Lex thinking ? I can't wait for the next update so you can fix this !! I really am loving this fic !!

[westwingwolf]

Oh Lex why do you make me hate you so? And yet I can't not love you. I'm looking on the bright side. He shared something special with Chloe, he wants her to see the good side of him. He did decide he'd rather stay with Chloe then help Lana with whatever she wanted when she called. I'm saying either Lex is confused or he is using Lana, either of which I can handle but not too long Lexy. You here me? You better make up your mind fast and it better be with the right woman.

I'm still loving Lois, she is so cool. I want a cousin like her.

Update. Update soon. Update now. I wonder if I can get that translated in Latin and made my slogan?

[hellinean]

your fic is really good!!! i 'd say poor chloe, stupid lex, funny Lois and Grrrrrrrr Lana!
no really, i really like how chloe and lex are friends but the kiss with lana..euh... disgusting, horrible !!!! I really hope Lex is going to realize how he feels for chloe and forget this stupid crush on Blana!
anyway Lois is really great! i love your Chlois !

But please, pretty pretty pretty please, update very very soon!!
you cant let your fic like this!!!!! i mean could u imagine how frustrated it is to wait for more ?

[Ann]

Update. Update nunc. Update iam. < Translated into Latin.

[letia84]

WTF did Lex do that for. I hate him right now. Update please and fix this problem.

[Shanna]

Lexana? Ickies! Oh, and poor Chloe. She doesn't seem to be having very good luck. Lexana ickiness, falling out of a tree, caught in the rain. If I had a night like that...not that I can climb a tree or anything, I'd cry too. More soon, please!

Shanna