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    I've just got to say "WOW"!! :biggrin: This story describes Lex and Chloe beautifully! I love how it isn't the kiss that scares them but the emotions behind it! Thank you so much for this story! Reading it again just made my day!! :chlexsign3:

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    Wow, this was such a beautiful little fic. I love your descriptions, they're so vivid and detailed.

    The sudden awareness of his taste in her mouth is like a high that can never be recreated to fit conveniently in a bottle. He rolled over her tongue like the words in her mind: Lex, Lex, Lex, and Chloe couldn’t help but wonder why her mind hasn't thought up something more eloquent or original to shout. But as his tongue swirls over her own, Chloe knows that it's because this is what Lex reduces her to. A pile of monolithic syllables that scream for him and only him. Fused together, Chloe realized belatedly that she'd lost her all oxygen in Lex and when she gasps for air to fill her burning lungs, in seeped the taste of Lex, forever branded on her soul.
    This is kind of a long quote, but I just thought this paragraph in particular was wonderful.

    Great job!

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    WOWWWEEEEEEEEEEE!
    i loved the short and sweet version you started with, but i must say i like the 2nd, improved/hotter version a lot also!!

    What an adorable ficlet! :

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    Both versions were excellent, but the second..... WOO-HOO!

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    Re: Not Just A Kiss (PG)

    short but sweet.

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    Re: Not Just A Kiss (PG)

    Extremely sweet! Love it
    *Coffee Break 9:00 to 5:00 Daily.
    *Heaven doesn't want me and hell is afraid I'll take over.
    *Are you crazy?
    *From zero to insane in 1.5 seconds!
    *If I agree with you, then we'd both be wrong!

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