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    Re: Complicity, R-rated Tomb missing scene *complete*

    That was an interesting look in what could have been Chloe's thoughts in those moments, it's weird to think of all the anger that might be festering inside of her because of how Lex has treated her but with Gretchen dictating her movements it was kind of weird. Good job, I liked it it alot.

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    I love it....................Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Re: Complicity, R-rated Tomb missing scene *complete*

    wonderful i can't wait for more.

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    Re: Complicity, R-rated Tomb missing scene *complete*

    I don't watch the show anymore so I'm kinda lost but this fic was very powerful, scary and intense. Great job!

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    Re: Complicity, R-rated Tomb missing scene *complete*

    Excellent job!

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    Re: Complicity, R-rated Tomb missing scene *complete*

    Loved it!

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    mmm. fantastic. that episode was the only one i could really stand this past season, and even then i threw pillows when lana told lex to have chloe committed.

    sweet insight. good job

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    Re: Complicity, R-rated Tomb missing scene *complete*

    Quote Originally Posted by nonky
    She felt the blond girl’s lips curve in a smile and marvelled at the idea of once again being flesh. She didn’t want to hurt the girl, but Chloe had wanted to help her find peace. It was hard to remember her own name, hard to remember all except her killer’s name. Chloe - her name was so hard to keep in mind, Chloe Sullivan - might be frightened and a little banged up afterwards, but she’d be fine. People had hurt her, too, and she knew why revenge was necessary. It was why Gretchen had chosen her.
    My frustration with Smallville increased as I rewatched 'Tomb' last night. I've used the phrase "if only" one too many times with this show. Really wish Smallville had shown a scene like this. Very well done. I really enjoyed the way that you compared Chloe and Gretchen.

    Quote Originally Posted by nonky
    Gretchen flung the girl’s arms up and clutched at the skull, trying to dig at the pity she felt from the girl. She’d been so stupid, so easy to hurt. So simple-minded to be seduced by a cheap bracelet and a few conversations.

    "He had ropes and a knife and he didn’t care when I cried that time."
    This part just made me want to cry.

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    Re: Complicity, R-rated Tomb missing scene *complete*

    I have read this fic a LOT of different times, but i guess i never seemed to leave a comment which is stupid! lol.. I loved it. Great job

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    Re: Complicity, R-rated Tomb missing scene *complete*

    Wow that was very good!! I loved the intensity of it!! And I liked reading a Chlex story again; I hadn't done that in a while.

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