Very great beginning... and would love too read alot more please???
Very great beginning... and would love too read alot more please???
I would LOVE to read the interview!
Um. This has more, right? Please?
Excellent story! Not quite long enough... *cough* but I won't demand more or anything. Nope. It's perfect as it is. I mean, I wouldn't want to read the interview, or see more Chlex interaction, that'd just be overkill. I don't think I could handle Lex not wanting Lana and turning to Chloe. I mean, who'd believe that? Pshaw! Whatev, right?
So, in conclusion... great story! Absolutely do not write more. We'd get spoiled if you did that.
Originally Posted by spiked
Heh, Luthor sandwich . . .
*drifts away for long moment*
Ahem. So, two Luthors? Yummy. Very good Lionel voice, great situation. Just tempting enough to lure Chloe into it even knowing she's better off well clear of them both. If you're looking for opinions, I'd love to see more of this.
Super bonus points for making sweater lint smutty.
Her soul is senstive like a finely made tuning fork. It vibrates and resonates with every little hint of trauma, evil and monstrosity that might be humming in the air, and channels it into expressions of fiction... or recomended websites - somethingeasy
It would be nice to see a sequel to this one ... curious to find out what happens with the interview.
The byplay between Lionel and Chloe was an icing on the cake deal when Lex got there. {Chuckles} Lionel really does know how to manipulate, doesn't he?
interesting story i hope you continue it i want more.
Luthor Sandwich--that made my day. Thanks!
Please tell me you're going to continue the story. I can't wait for the next update.
I'd love to read more of this story - its a great begining but it just begs to be continued. Sequel or update please!
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