Proposition (PG-13)

[Skye]

Very great beginning... and would love too read alot more please???

[ggdoll18]

I would LOVE to read the interview!

[sylvia]

Um. This has more, right? Please?

[sinecure]

Excellent story! Not quite long enough... *cough* but I won't demand more or anything. Nope. It's perfect as it is. I mean, I wouldn't want to read the interview, or see more Chlex interaction, that'd just be overkill. I don't think I could handle Lex not wanting Lana and turning to Chloe. I mean, who'd believe that? Pshaw! Whatev, right?

So, in conclusion... great story! Absolutely do not write more. We'd get spoiled if you did that.

[kitten]

Lionel took a step as well and plucked a piece of lint off of her shoulder. “You had something,” he explained, obviously pleased with his ability to scare her.

“Thanks,” Chloe gritted out, vaguely aware of Lex’s hands still on her arms, and how close behind her he was standing. She suddenly had the words ‘Luthor Sandwich’ in her head for several uncomfortable seconds.

“Well Dad,” Lex didn’t even try to hide his disapproval. “Though I’m sure Chloe enjoys being harassed by you as much as the next woman, I’m going to have to ask you to excuse us.”

“Certainly, son,” Lionel smiled greasily, making it sound more like a slight than a term of endearment.

Chloe didn’t protest this time as Lex steered her away, into his office. She could recognize the lesser of two evils when she saw it. At least, she though so.

Heh, Luthor sandwich . . .

*drifts away for long moment*

Ahem. So, two Luthors? Yummy. Very good Lionel voice, great situation. Just tempting enough to lure Chloe into it even knowing she's better off well clear of them both. If you're looking for opinions, I'd love to see more of this.

Super bonus points for making sweater lint smutty.

[~*~Tasha~*~]

It would be nice to see a sequel to this one ... curious to find out what happens with the interview.

The byplay between Lionel and Chloe was an icing on the cake deal when Lex got there. {Chuckles} Lionel really does know how to manipulate, doesn't he?

[starmoon]

interesting story i hope you continue it i want more.

[sarahnicole]

Luthor Sandwich--that made my day. Thanks!

[elitekat]

Please tell me you're going to continue the story. I can't wait for the next update.

[blip_dragon]

I'd love to read more of this story - its a great begining but it just begs to be continued. Sequel or update please!