I loved this whole story. I do have to say as well that I starting laughing out loud (and hearing the voice in my head) at the line where Chloe tells Lex "Lucy you've got some explaining to do." I could just hear Desi Arnez as Rickay Ricardo saying that to Lucy. {chuckles} He was always so funny in those shows, and it fit that particular chapter perfectly. The "Be sure to throw out the trash before you come up Honey" in that same chapter was a hoot too!
ROFL ont he card to Lois that said Thanks for the Lessons, Lex. LOL. Still chuckling over that one.
This was a great story. It has a lot of different facets that I enjoyed. You wrote the characters well, and it had a great plot. I like seeing Lionel go down when he's being the idiot. This was a great idea for a sequel.
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