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    What I really want… (NC-17)


    Title: What I really want… (NC-17)
    Author: Letia84
    Pairing: Lex / Chloe
    Rating: Sexual Content, Adult Language and Content
    Disclaimer: I do not own these characters. Own by DC and Warner Brothers
    Summary: Lex loses Chloe in the cave during the meteor shower and is determined to find her and finally tell her his true feeling then get what he really wants from her, her love.

    Chapter 1 (Lex POV)
    Thank You

    “Chloe do want a drink?” Lex said standing at the bar on the Luthor Corp jet. They were heading back to Smallville. Lex had never been happier when his sources told him Chloe was alive in a hospital in Yukon, Canada.

    He didn't know how she got there nor did he care anymore. He just wanted to make sure she was safe.

    He flew to get her immediately. He had to make sure she was ok. His guilt for bringing her to caves was so overwhelming he didn’t believe he could go on with life if she died because of him.

    He pushed her away trying to forget her smile, her warmth, and her wit. He attempted to bury himself in his plans to find the stones use Lana to do it and find out Clark’s secret.

    Then the realization hit that she could be gone forever and his feelings for her were never expressed. It would just add to another failure in the long list in his life. Things had gone so wrong with his quest for the stones. He failed with Lana in getting what he wanted and finding the truth about Clark was turning out to be a dead end. He wouldn’t let Chloe go as another failure.

    When he found her he was going to finally make her an invitation into his life. She seemed to want him to but he pushed her away to afraid to rely on emotions as his guide. He could no longer suppress his feelings. He loved her and he was going to make sure she knew and hoped he would get what he wanted, her loving him back.

    “Yes could I have something warm please? I don’t do scotch like you.” Chloe replied to Lex walking over to him at the bar. “Lex thank you for coming to get me. I wish I could explain to you what happen to me in the caves but…”

    Lex interrupted her “Chloe stop. There is no need to thank me or explain. I had to find you. If it weren’t for me you wouldn’t have been there in danger in the first place. I am sorry for putting you in that position again.”

    “Lex you were acting on instinct when you saw me in the study. I would have thought the same thing you had if I saw you in the same place you found me. Just let me thank you”

    Chloe leaned in closer to Lex’s face almost about to touch his lips with hers “Let me thank you Lex” she said then pressed her lips into his.

    Lex couldn’t believe what was happening. Chloe was kissing him. He hadn’t even told her he loved her yet but she was kissing him. She must love me to he thought as he let his hands leave the glass he was holding to wrap Chloe into his arms.

    Lex slipped his tongue into her mouth when she opened for him and played around with hers letting the feeling of getting what he wanted wash over him. Then he jerked to a stop when he felt Chloe’s hand on his hardening cock.

    “Wait you don’t have to thank me like this. I don’t want you to think that…” Lex’s thought was cut short because Chloe was kissing him again pushing him into one of the plush chairs in the cabin.

    When she finally released his lips she got on her knees and looked up into his eyes “Lex please just let me thank you.” Then she moved her hands back to his forming bulge and unzipped his pants pulling them down freeing his now fully erect cock from her touch.

    “Chloe you don’t have to do…” He was cut off again because now her tongue was licking up and down his cock. “Ahhh! Chloe that feels amazing” he said starting to lose control.

    He didn’t put up anymore fight he let Chloe thank him. She started sucking away at the head of his cock and using her hand to pump the rest of him. “Fuck! That feels so good Chloe” he shouted grabbing at her shoulders.

    Then Chloe moved her hand and slid his cock completely into her mouth. She started to bob her head up and down his length. Lex pushed into her mouth getting her into the perfect rhythm. “Fuck!” he shouted again knowing his release was now quickly approaching.

    He gripped her shoulder tighter as she settled into his pushes and Lex was now panting saying her name over and over again. She was giving him this. She was thanking him. It wasn’t her returning his feelings but it was start.

    Chloe grabbed onto Lex’s thighs increased her rhythm sucking harder on him. He couldn’t take anymore he bucked up into her mouth coming in short spurts screaming her name shutting his eyes in ecstasy.

    As his orgasm settled he heard his name in the distance. “Mr. Luthor! Mr. Luthor!”

    He opened his eyes and saw his pilot shaking him trying to wake him up. Chloe wasn’t there. She wasn’t down on her knees pleasing him.

    “Mr. Luthor we are here. The transport is ready to take you to the girl. Are you ok sir your sweating?” the pilot said.

    Lex realized he was only dreaming. That he just arrived in Yukon, Canada on his way to retrieve Chloe.

    “I’m fine.” Lex said in a cold voice. He was pissed that Chloe wasn’t really with him giving him a blow job.

    He could only hope that when he told her he loved her that she would even give him a hug let alone a blow job after what he put her though.

    TBC

    Chapter 2 (Chloe POV)
    Truth

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    Re: What I really want… NC-17 (First FIC)

    Hahaha! Poor Lex. I thought that was a little too easy. This fic has promise. Good luck with it. Your very brave in starting a fic, I haven't been able to work up the nerve yet.
    By the way, this is a NC-17 thread, so you can use actual swear words, they don't have to be ***.
    I hope to hear more from you soon.

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    Re: What I really want… NC-17 (First FIC)

    he heh heh!! now thats not a good way to wake up! nice start, few typo's, not that I can talk, Im crap at typeing. more soon please.

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    Re: What I really want… NC-17 (First FIC)

    I thought you did a great job for your first fic. Interesting start to the story & the smut was pretty good. Can't wait to read more.

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    Re: What I really want… NC-17 (First FIC)

    wow great start ! well done for a first fic and can't wait for the next chapter.

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    Re: What I really want… NC-17 (First FIC)

    Fantastic start a blowjob in the first chapter even if he was only dreaming Looking forward to reading Chloe's point of view next. Good job keep it up!!

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    Re: What I really want… NC-17 (First FIC)

    I knew it was a dream. It was a great start. I can't wait to see what happens next.


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    Re: What I really want… NC-17 (First FIC)

    haha... too bad it was a dream... what a way to thank a man. lol

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    Re: What I really want… NC-17 (First FIC)

    That was an interesting beginning, I hope there's going to be more soon

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    Great start so far!!!


    Continue!

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