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    Re: Sin City (Nc-17)

    Thats an interesting start, I hope there's going to be more soon

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    Re: Sin City (Nc-17)

    OWWWww sound very very interesting... Lex and chloe and ..sins ... yep i like the start
    i hope you'll update soon !!

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    Re: Sin City (Nc-17)

    Suspect horny!Lex, which is always good. There should be more stories with him in it. Keep it up, and good original idea. Very refreshing!

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    Re: Sin City (Nc-17)

    very interesting start, can't wait to find out how they all apply.

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    Re: Sin City (Nc-17)

    interesting start! I can't wait for the next update !!

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    Re: Sin City (Nc-17)

    My curiousity is peaked. Looking forward to the next installment.

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    Re: Sin City (Nc-17)

    Owww, I never get so many replies in a story !

    Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback....

    Here the next chapter !

    ***

    In Lois' apartment, she and Clark double checked the power but everything was fine.

    "Weird… but kind of normal for Smallville," Lois concluded.

    "Yeah," Clark said as he sat down on Lois' new bed. "Did you get a new bed?"

    "Huh-huh," Lois said with a mischievous smile, as she approached him. "The old one was so not me." She pressed herself up against him then pushed him onto his back.

    "Lois… what?"

    "Do you wanna go for a test drive?"

    "Lois… I can't…" but before Clark could protest, Lois straddled his hips and started to take off his shirt.

    "I want you, Clark. Right here, right now," she said kissing him.

    ***

    On the way to Chloe's house, Chloe yelled out, pointing to a store window, "Lex, stop! I'm sorry but did you see that dress? It's 50% off. I have to get it!"

    "Right now?" Lex asked confused by Chloe's sudden desire to go shopping.

    "Of course, silly the sale's not going to last forever. Come on," she made Lex park then dragged him into the store.

    An hour later, after spending all her money and Lex's, Chloe had Lex drive them back to his mansion after Chloe insisted on baking him a chocolate cake. She dropped all her shopping bags in Lex's office and started to walk towards the kitchen.

    "Are you sure, you're okay Chloe?" Lex asked concerned.

    "Of course!" she said dragging Lex into the kitchen and putting on an apron. "Don't you like chocolate?"

    "I love chocolate."

    "End of discussion, then."

    Continued...

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    Mrs Dean Winchester Senior Member pipersmum's Avatar
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    Re: Sin City (Nc-17)

    Still want more that was too short very quick update which I like but too short please come back don't make me beg because it is not a pretty sight

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    Re: Sin City (Nc-17)

    Wow that was quick !! I agree with Pipersmum though was a bit on the short side ! Not that im complaining im just greedy and want more ! lol

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    Re: Sin City (Nc-17)

    ohh i like this, i like it alot!!! I cant wait to see who gets what, though I have one or two ideas allrady!

    MORE!!!!!

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