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    Elviriel
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    My Immortal (PG)

    Hello I wrote a fanfic. I'm sorry I saw someone already wrote a songfic with the same song but when I wrote the story I swear I didn't know ! Please forgive me but i have to post this !

    Songfic : My Immortal by Evanescence. It's short and sad.
    The characters are not mine, neither is the song.


    I'm so tired of being here
    Supressed by all my childish fears

    Lex Luthor was standing in his room, alone. 24th January 2005.
    Two years. Two years since he made her go ...
    He was thinking, alone in his bedroom, wrapped inside the walls,
    in his prison of loneliness and pain.

    And if you have to leave
    I wish that you would just leave

    Chloe Sullivan was listening to music, alone in her room.
    She was holding a photo in her hand. She was watching it,
    tears in the eyes, lost in rememberies.

    Cause your presence still lingers here
    And it won't leave me alone

    Lex could still feel her. In the same room he was stading
    in right now. She has been here, with him. She’s been loving
    him. He’s been pulling her away.

    These wounds won't seem to heal
    This pain is just too real
    There's just too much that time can not erase

    Two years, Chloe thought. Two years and it seemed still so new.
    Her heart was still fragile, broken. Every time she was thinking
    of him, she wanted to cry as much as the day he left, as if she was
    still this little lovesick teenager.

    When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
    When you scream I'd fight away all of your fears

    He remembered her face when he he had said he was leaving her.
    These eyes he adored so much became wet, and tears slided down
    her cheek. He remembered how much he wanted to take her in his
    arms, tell her he was staying. But he kept himself cold and calm.
    As he used to.

    And I held your hand through all of these years
    But you still have all of me

    He left. Chloe remembered that she has been wondering why
    when he told her. Why, after all they had together, why did he leave ?
    She loved him so much. But it was so, so far now.

    You used to captivate me by your resonating mind
    Now I'm bound by the life you left behind

    She was so smart, so beautiful, so amazing. In his heart,
    Lex could still feel an empty space, like a lack of love.
    Without her, all was like ... senseless.

    Your face it haunts my once pleasant dreams
    Your voice it chased away all the sanity in me

    Chloe looked down at the picture. He was smiling to her.
    His deep blue eyes were happy. Happiness. She remembered
    how much this had fell when he had said that. “I’m sorry, Chloe.
    You deserve so much better than me ...”
    These wounds won't seem to heal
    This pain is just too real
    There's just too much that time can not erase

    When did he feel this pain so strong still ? Lex sighed deeply :
    it was like Chloe’s smell was still in the air. He loved her ...
    But it was too late.

    When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
    When you scream I'd fight away all of your fears

    She know he didn’t want to leave her. She had seen the tears
    in his eyes. She wanted to hug him, but he had pushed her away.
    He was scared. He was afraid he could hurt her ... But he did hurt
    her. The simple fact to leave brought chloe the deepest wound of her life.

    And I held your hand through all of these years
    But you still have all of me

    Lex had now tears in the eyes. It was like all was coming back,
    turning him upside down like a storm. He wanted to go back
    two years ago, when he was with her ... but he wasn’t.

    I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone
    But do you're still with me
    I've been alone all along

    Chloe’s tears fell down her cheeks, and she bite her lip.
    She wished he could be here right now. That he could
    enter the room, take her in his arms, and all would be forgotten ...
    But she opened her eyes, and saw she was still alone.

    When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
    When you scream I'd fight away all of your fears
    I held your hand through all of these years
    But you still have all of me


    Hope you liked it ! I almost cried when I wrote it ! ( I know it's stupid &#33

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    awwwwwwwwwwwwww. thats so sad... and a great song.

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    Oh that was so sad. :crygreen:

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