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    It was short and to the point but you can't just leave it like that
    You need to come back and update soon as i need to know more please

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    Re: He won't die if you do what I say (PG-13) chap 2 up

    Please update again as soon as possible!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    You can't stop there I want more.


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    Re: He won't die if you do what I say (PG-13) chap 2 up

    That was too short but we'll forgive you if you come back soon with a long update!!!

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    Re: He won't die if you do what I say (PG-13) chap 2 up

    Poor Lex, I can only imagine how freaked out he has to be after that phone call. I hope he can manage to saty cool and think rationally. More, please

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    Re: He won't die if you do what I say (PG-13) chap 2 up

    Thanks for the feed back guys. I'm glad you like this story. I'm getting more ideas for it.. Oh yeah I'm so tired from my new job. Waking up at six in the morning leaves me exhausted the whole day. I might update this weekend. No promises! You'll have to excuse the little thing called "job" that gets in the way of my writting. I want to update as much as I can. Anyway I'm rambling.. ta.

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    Chapter Three: Rush
    Lex Luthor began to panic and ran to the nearest officer explaining the tragedy.

    “Officer! Officer!” He yelled as he ran up to the police man. He turned around to face the tall bald man.
    “Someone shot my girlfriend!” Lex about shouted and was being hysterical. His eyes were narrowed with worry his face was almost pale. He couldn’t even think about living with out his beautiful girl.
    “Son, just relax. Where did she get shot at?” Lex had no idea and his shoulders slumped and he let out a moan of agony.
    “I don’t know.” He said out of breath.
    “I heard the gun go off when I was talking to her on the phone. She sounded upset.” The officer pondered this.
    “I think I know how to solve this dilemma. Follow me.” Lex quickly followed the officer and they went to the main controls of the terminal. There were several small TV’s that were hooked up to the security video cameras in the control room.
    “Sir if you just tell me the time I can help you.” Lex put his hand up to his forehead in frustration and tried to remember. Then he looked at his cell to see when she called.
    “12:15pm.”
    “Jack play all video’s from lunch till now.” Jack did as he said and they looked till Lex saw Chloe going to the bathroom.
    “That’s her! She said she had to go to the bathroom. Who’s that guy following her?” Lex asked curiously as his eyes narrowed more.
    “Jack zoom in on camera three.” Jack zoomed in and he saw a pretty clear picture of the man.
    “I’m sorry I don’t know who that is.” Lex then saw Chloe go in the bathroom on the black and white monitor and a few seconds later he saw her come out, and he saw the guy point something to her back, and she was commanded to walk.
    “Where is that at?” Lex asked.
    “The west side of the terminal.”
    “How do I get there?” Lex asked hurriedly now.
    “I’ll have someone escort you in a vehicle.” The officer said and took Lex to the transportation.

    Meanwhile Jim and Max were still in their business room and Chloe was still afraid. She kept thinking about Lex repeatedly. She knew that he was worried for her.

    “Ms. Sullivan I need you to make a very important phone call.” Max said as he handed her his cell phone.
    “Why?” She asked with a slight whisper. Max sighed annoyingly.
    “If you don’t your boyfriend will die.” Chloe didn’t want Lex to die so she took the phone.
    “Who do I call?”
    “Lionel Luthor is scheduled to be at Luthorcorp in less then one hour. I need you to call him and tell him to go to the plant in Smallville.”
    “Why?” Chloe didn’t like where this was going. Max smiled evilly. Chloe was beginning to connect the dots. ‘Murder’.
    “You’re going to kill him?” Chloe said trembling.
    “He murdered his parents who were our best friends.”
    “More like business partners.” Jim added. Chloe scoffed.
    “Why do you need me?”
    “We know he fancies you. Ms. Sullivan if you don’t do this then I have no choice in killing your boyfriend.” Max threatened again. Chloe felt sick in the stomach from all her emotions.
    “I also need you make up a lie to get him there. Do you need the number?”
    “No.” Chloe dialed and a tear slid down her cheek. Ring, ring, ring. Lionel picked up.

    “Yeah?” Lionel said on the other line. Chloe had streams of tears going down her cheeks.
    “Mr. Luthor its Chloe.” Chloe was very upset.
    “Ms. Sullivan, you sound upset is everything alright?” Lionel asked worriedly.
    “I’m fine. Lex needs you to check on something at the plant in level two in Smallville before you go to Luthorcorp in Metropolis.” Chloe was about crying and Lionel was getting more concerned.
    “Ms. Sullivan are you sure you’re alright?” He asked one more time.
    “I’m fine Mr. Luthor.”
    “I’ll check on that. What room do I go to?” ‘Crap!’ Chloe thought.
    “The first room on Level Two. I think Lex said something about starting a new project, and he wanted your ok before he started it.”
    “I thought you two were on vacation?”
    “He’s having some of his people work on it.”
    “Ok. Bye Ms. Sullivan.” They both hung up and Chloe sank to the floor and balled and the two men didn’t even care. Jim’s phone went off and he talked to one of the people that was in on this plan.

    “Sir Lex Luthor is getting closer to our section.” Max didn’t look pleased.
    “It seems your boyfriend cares deeply about you.” He grabbed her by the arm and she reluctantly got up and they began to move out, to a different section of the terminal.
    “Why can’t you let me go? You got what you wanted.” Chloe said frightenly as they moved faster. Max shoved her in the boys bathroom and locked the door because he saw a police man.
    “You’re not going anywhere miss.” Max hissed in her face.
    “Oh yeah? Well take this!” Chloe got up the courage and punched the guy in his face and then kicked him in the grind.
    “That’s for ruining our anniversary.” She punched the next guy in the face hurriedly and quickly unlocked the door and rushed out and shut it behind her. She saw Lex running in her direction.

    “Chloe!” Lex yelled with relief. They ran to each other and embraced each other with a kiss and hug.
    “I thought you were dead!” Lex said quickly.
    “The guy shot my cell phone. Lex give me your phone.” Lex handed her his phone and was confused.
    “Why?” He asked. Chloe quickly dialed Lionel’s private line which Lex gave her for an emergency.
    “If I don’t call your father he will die.” Chloe saw the bathroom door open.
    “Run!” Chloe half yelled and Lex saw the two men coming after them with a gun pointing at them. Bang, bang. Max shot in their direction and Chloe and Lex made a dive for the floor. Chloe still had Lex’s phone up to her ear.

    “Hello?” Lionel asked and he was almost to the plant in Smallville.
    “Mr. Luthor turn around! Do not go in the plant!” Chloe was more worriedly now and Lex helped her up and they ran and Max shot the police officer who helped Lex.
    “Wh-" A bomb went off as soon as Lionel got close to the plant.

    I know I'm so bad.

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    You are bad I want more man.
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    ahhhhhhhh how could you leave us hanging like that!!!! Please come back and update soon.

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    Re: He won't die if you do what I say (PG-13) chap 3 up

    More Soon I hate cliffhangers...

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