HeyO!! Happie Late B-day! Oh, my little cousin and you share the same birthday. Isn't that just cool. Great fic you have here. Write more okie dokie =]
HeyO!! Happie Late B-day! Oh, my little cousin and you share the same birthday. Isn't that just cool. Great fic you have here. Write more okie dokie =]
If that was sap then plzzz pour me another bowl cuz I loved it!! This is really how they should have ended up in the show they could have salvaged the 4th season. Honestly this was very well written and the last few lines had me awwing. You were right on the ball with Lex rather believing that she'd want him for money instead of wanting him for well him. It was scrumdiddlyumcious!! OH AND HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY...YOU ROCK... KEEP ON WRITING!!!
That was beautiful, loved the last line...just perfect!!!
Kimmie
That was lovely. I've just started watching the show but the characters of Chloe and Lex have really captured me.
Hope to see something else from you soon,
kg99
that was sweet and cute i realy enjoyed reading it.
loved it!
lovely fic
Kirsten
Great beginning here. For your first time writing Chloe I was pleased by your characterization. You got Lex's stuffy guilt out, and his reluctance to show it as well. This passage was something I could see and hear in my head and it had a certain intensity that comes of real chemistry between characters. It was just authentic.
A fine debut into Chlex. I look forward to reading more from you.Originally Posted by kHo
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*sigh* Another good one. You have more around here, don't you? *eyes the rest of NS frantically*
Now this is one I'd love to see more about. Maybe other short stories wrapped up in this timeline? Drop one now and again that either led up to this or follow it? Huh? Maybe? If I ask real nice?
Good work. Thanks for sharing...
Reese
Very sweet
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