Second time I read this fic - still great!
Second time I read this fic - still great!
Okay, I love love love this story. Good guy Lex makes me happy and it still sounded like him. Everyone was in character. Even that female officer waiting with them for Chloe's arrival was on point. Gabe was just awesome. I was glad that he was a take charge dad in this. (Come on Smallville writers; could we really believe that Chloe was raised by a wimp?!) It was a great balance of comedy and mystery for me. I can't wait to find more of your work! Thank you!
Awww.... I like this story. The storyline was really good. I had my favorite parts such as the verbal & antagonistic judo between Bruce and Chloe. It was almost like Lex and Chloe's verbal judo. The interaction between the characters was definitely entertaining especially when Chloe drives Bruce insane.
I totally got into the story and actually felt mad at Chloe for trying to reveal Bruce's secret. She wasn't thinking about it and seemed like she wanted to undo all the good that Batman did. I also felt bad for Lex when Danny caused trouble for him with Gabe. I felt that Danny deserved worse than a "complete physical exam" including BCS.
Anyway, the point is I enjoyed this story and got me to react to certain situations in it. Great job and thank you for writing it. Hope to see more from you in the future. =D
I love this fic (: Thanks for this wonderful story! <3
This was a fantastic read. Cross over fics are hard to pull off but you did it well keeping everyone in character. I know you wrote this a few years ago but I just discovered it now. Thank you.
Last edited by Dolly; 5th June 2012 at 23:11.
I was just about to start reading it when I noticed the note "PDF posted", when I can get a PDF?
newbatgirl hasn't been around in a really long time, so I'll PM you the PDF myself.*wink*Originally Posted by TrinityR
Thxs to beeej for the avi
A MASTER LIST OF ALL MY COMPLETED WORKS & WIPs w/PDFs
"PERMANENT" WIPs (UNLESS MY CHLEX MUSE AWAKENS AGAIN AND I GET A LONG-NEEDED CLONE OF MYSELF)
"Choices"May 30 '11
"At Second Sight" August 21 '11
PODFIC REQUESTS
INTERVIEW
VIDEOS
Thank you very much, Lexie!:*
This fic is amazing
Great plot, hot stuff, funny interaction between Chloe and Batman
And the beautiful and trusting friendship between Lex, Chloe and Bruce
Malu
Just as good the second time around.
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