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    ...sleep all day. Senior Member Ainur's Avatar
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    Re: First Impressions, PG

    This was very nice. To see all the different emotions that Chloe feels towards Lex. From not liking him to accepting he's not a bad guy. They way you describe the feelings were fantastic.

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    Re: First Impressions, PG

    Just a few favorite lines from this:
    Quote Originally Posted by June
    She hates the fact that he did it completely unbeknownst to himself and with little effort.

    from the looks of it, what he feels for the devil himself is anything but loving admiration.

    She thinks that the swagger he has as he enters a room makes him pompous.

    She betrayed her best friend; made a deal with the devil. She traded a piece of her soul for a byline in the Daily Planet and now she’s paying the price.

    She does however think about how low his opinion must be of her right then, ... She convinces herself that she’s better than that, better than wondering what Smallville’s very own puppeteer thought of her.

    And it’s then, as he says the words of comfort with conviction, that Chloe Sullivan decides that Lex Luthor just may turn out to be not such a bad guy.
    nice ficlet.

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    Re: First Impressions, PG

    That was great
    *Coffee Break 9:00 to 5:00 Daily.
    *Heaven doesn't want me and hell is afraid I'll take over.
    *Are you crazy?
    *From zero to insane in 1.5 seconds!
    *If I agree with you, then we'd both be wrong!

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