That was a great story... I liked how I didn't know what was going on till the end and how you gave little clues through out the story. Wonderfull Writting!!
I completely loved the end, with it being a novel written by Gabe! Awesome!!
That was a great story... I liked how I didn't know what was going on till the end and how you gave little clues through out the story. Wonderfull Writting!!
I completely loved the end, with it being a novel written by Gabe! Awesome!!
Great story!
The idea was brilliant!
Lol Ive read this once before but I guess I forgot to comment on it! LOVED IT!
*Coffee Break 9:00 to 5:00 Daily.
*Heaven doesn't want me and hell is afraid I'll take over.
*Are you crazy?
*From zero to insane in 1.5 seconds!
*If I agree with you, then we'd both be wrong!
Thanks to all of my fellow Chlexers for rereading this older fic and just to be completely obnoxious, please check out the two sequels:
Violet Noir
The Butcher's Boy
Last edited by Kit Merlot; 22nd March 2014 at 03:02.
KATHY
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This is brilliant. I'm so happy for Secret Chlex which is making me go back and read things to try to work out people's styles.
I love that it was all Gabe. He would write a great book and it shows where Chloe gets her writing skills from.
KATHY
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