The Rules of Enmity: NC17

[hfce]

What a great update to start the new year with. I love how they are opening up little by little to eachother. I can't wait to read the next update.


HAPPY NEW YEAR!!

Hope

[katieandjason]

I love Charlie, he's the best side character ever created. Also, Lex and Chloe together in the tub was funny, cute, and endearing. It's nice to have a little breather like that after so much drama and angst.

[lj715]

Loved the update! Wow, Chloe taking a bath with Lex...god I'm jealous. Charlie is great as usual. Can't wait for the next update.

[star del mar]

Lex is such a sweetheart, I almost can't stand it But he's just trying to be so good with Chloe and keep her comfortable...and diamonds aren't so bad either, heh. Charlie's distracted! Not that I don't love him but now Chlex isn't in danger Great update!

Steph*

[Shanna]

I adore Charlie. And if I wasn't such a Chlexer, I'd be a...a...Charloer, or would that be Chlarlier. You get the picture. Loved the rubber ducky and the manly bubbles. Too cute!

Shanna

[showntell]

Has Lex got some sort of bath fetish? Rubber duckies and bubble bath???

Did she actually take the pills?

[maire78]

Great chapter, please update again soon.

[pipersmum]

Lex Luthor playing with a rubber duck !!! That is quite a odd image plus Lex liking bubbles but not the girlie smell they don't think of men when making bubbles Charlie was great as usual I can sense a romance between Charlie and Sheri coming on
Looking forward to the next part.

[meg20]

Nice fun in the bath and the ducky Is Chloe going to play matchmaker for her friends?
Lovely update!!!

[Dreamergirl]

Excellent update!! I'll appreciate that little tid bit about the mirror the next time a million dollars fall out of the sky and the SO is complaining for a vacation. Lol. I think the scene in the bathroom was really well down, it was intimate and personal by sharing all the details(the sleep statements made me awww) without being overdone. The dialouge also flowed really well. And the line "You’ve no idea how tough it is to find this stuff unscented. People seem to think it should be girly-smelling all the time" was brilliant, hahah great great words from Lex luthor. I also noticed how smooth your transistion was from quiet to jokes about the duck. Oooh and the duck and the pendent? Gosh I need a man like that haha.

My heart went out once again to Chloe at 'The sympathy of a friend broke down the last barrier that had been holding her up... ' why is it always when someone asks if you're okay that you cry harder?

Once again greattt chapter, good to see how the relationship is delevoping. And I'm interested to see where you take Charlie and Sherie ( I love him by the way!!).