The Rules of Enmity: NC17

[lj715]

Wow, really great update. Very hot! Really like how Lex & Chloe are with each other in this story. Can't wait for the next update with the rubber duckies.

[Blackberry]

Ohh... why does he not want to look at the shower...? o_O curious...

but hooot... I want me some action... where's my boy when i need him? *grumbles*

[hfce]

That was HOT!!!!! But what really was nice was Lex seeing what she went through. It was painful but necessary. I can't wait to see the rubber ducky time. I am glad Lex thought quick on his feet about the birth control. EEK!!!


Hope

[pipersmum]

Great update It was very touching Lex studying all the marks on her body shame he didn't kiss them better Glad they realised about birth control in the nick of time. I can't wait to read what happens in the bath with the rubber ducks!!! More soon please

[Kit Merlot]

Zelda, excellent update!

I like that lex realizes how strong Chloe is, but that she also needs comforting. And I'm glad that they are finally finished with hurting each other. The smutty scene was fantastic, by the way

Nicely done.

[teb85]

Loved the update ! Smut scene was fantastic and can't wait for the next installment !!

[kcsgirl82]

Awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE update again soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[buffiy18]

GREAT update. Thanks for including something with the Tatoos in the chapter. Loved how Lex could feel his name on his chest when he had Chloe's back to him. You are great at keeping the story believeable and constantly eveloving all the time. Looking forward to the duckies.

[Krysia]

“You hide pain all the time.”

“So do you.”


“Do the bruises turn you on?”
“No, but whenever you touch…your name, the reaction is always the same. Though not always as quickly as when you’re naked while you’re doing it.”

This was my favourite part of the story....Probably because it shows how perfect they are for eachother. How different and yet how very the same they can be. It also made me ache for both of them, for everything they went through and what lies ahead if them. Still I love it the most because in the end they have each other s I know no matter what the pain it won't brake them.
The second quote marks my other fqavourite part. I like how Chloe always had a special way of getting to Lex, owning some part of him. He's so in control of himself and everyone/everything around him, he only reacts when and how he wants to. But not with CHloe. She knows how to puh his buttons. Either by verbal judo or like here by phisically touching her name.
I loved the description of Lexes room. With all that details it was easier to imagine how it looks like I hope they can relax for a bit before reality comes back in.

[BellaMR]

Great update. Bath time is always fun. I especially loved the visual of their tatoos touching.

I can't wait for the next one.