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    Re: The Rules of Enmity: NC17*chp 3 5.1.05*

    I'm totally loving this story! Great update, can't wait for the next one.
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    Re: The Rules of Enmity: NC17*chp 3 5.1.05*

    i am so loving tis neverending cycle fo two people who can[t seem to stop themselves from harming one another

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    Re: The Rules of Enmity: NC17*chp 3 5.1.05*

    I'm loving this story so far and can't wait for the touchy-feely moments to come.

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    Re: The Rules of Enmity: NC17*chp 3 5.1.05*

    This was an intense chapter. Chloe and Lex each blame the other for a death in their family, but neither is directly responsible for the death, though.

    BRILLIANT!
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    Re: The Rules of Enmity: NC17*chp 3 5.1.05*

    Wow, the explanation for their reason to get the tattoos was a lot more involved then I would have thought. It was an awesome chapter! It was great to see how they both reacted in those moments. Now I can't wait to see what else happens...maybe they can find a way to start moving on. I can't wait for another update!

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    Re: The Rules of Enmity: NC17*update 4/30*

    I've been reading this since you've put this up, and I have to apologize profusely for not feedback until now. It's a wonderful story, and the relationship and history you've handled well. It's complex and original, something i've come to expect from you, and I can't wait until the next chapter.

    "Walk away, Sullivan. It’s cost you a lot already. You don’t need your sanity to add to the pile."

    "Might be too late."
    I really, really like sheri. And I thought that was such an awesome way to end the chapter.

    *waiting for more, patiently as possible*

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    Re: The Rules of Enmity: NC17*chp 3 5.1.05*

    Chloe and Lex are two twisted sick people. If they get together they will drive eachother to the crazy house. No way would it work.


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    Re: The Rules of Enmity: NC17*chp 3 5.1.05*

    heh, heh, she promised us touchy feely bits!!!
    way cool. more please.

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    Re: The Rules of Enmity: NC17*chp 3 5.1.05*

    Thank you so much for explaining Chloe and Lex's past!! I really hurt for Lex and Chloe!! I hope that you will be able to make everything better soon!! You're so good at that in your stories!! Post again soon please!!

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    This is very dark...in a good way. I like it alot. Wanting to inflict pain to ease your own is a natural feeling, and adds to the reality of the characters. I just hope Chloe and Lex can find solace in loving each other instead of hurting each other. Nice job.

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