The Rules of Enmity: NC17

[pipersmum]

Great another update I am really enjoying this fic

"Have I ever told you that you’re too tall?" She leaned forward and kissed his cheek. Then she rested her forehead against his and put her arms around his neck. With the table, she actually had a few inches on him.

Charlie ran a hand over the top of her head and tugged a few of the shorter strands that now framed her face and rubbed them between his fingers.

"Interesting color you’ve chosen." Chloe smiled. "Haven’t seen you smile much lately." She shrugged. "Don’t scare me again, not like that."

"Promise."

"I love you, Sullivan. You know that, right?"

"I love you too, Charlie, and you know that’s why I did what I thought I had to do." He nodded.

"Alright then, just this once," he whispered, slipping his hand to the back of her neck and bringing her face down to his. He kissed her, gently and softly on the lips. Then let go. "Now help me sit down."

Charlie is so sweet
Looking forward to more soon

[malugargula]

I'm so glad that Charlie is fine

He's a sweet person
Please more soon...

[hfce]

That was great. Go Lex punch him until he dies. He so deserves it. I am glad Charlie is ok. More please....

Hope

[Kit Merlot]

Zelda, excellent update.

I like that things are getting beautifully resolved. Lex and Chloe are coming to terms with their pasts, and how they've hurt each other. And neither one will talk about it, but I think they want a future together

I'm glad that Charlie's okay, but I'm really glad that Jake isn't.

This story ROCKS!!

[lj715]

Glad Charlie is ok but, I really wanted Lex to be there when Chloe woke up. What Lex did to Jake was perfect, he so deserves more than that. Great update & can't wait for more.

[BellaMR]

I love how this story is progressing. I'm glad gave Jake a little more physical pain. If his current pain had subsided enough for him to put down the ice pack, he diffinitly is due for another punch.
I'm also glad that they have some hard evidence on Jake's attack. A weasel like him might slip through the cracks otherwise.

[star del mar]

I LOVE Charlie, I'm so glad he's ok even though he's still a little weak. He's just awesome, understanding and sweet. And Lex, I'm glad he hit the bastard...he deserves it. Great update!

Steph*

[kimmie]

Wow, Jake so deserved every single punch he got and a lot more. i loved the interaction between Chloe and Charlie, it was very sweet. But where is Lex gone? Why wasn't he in the bed when chloe woke up?

Kimmie

[eternitychlex]

Amazing as always...........I love the whole Chloe and Charlie conversation, they are so good together........and not to mention the whole thing with Lex and Jake; that was awesome...........Please update soon........I need more......I can not wait for what is to come..........

[meg20]

So glad that Charlie is feeling better and espescially happy about Lex Hitting that bastard Jake and hope he's gonna pay for everything he has done!!!