Broken Sonnet Series - Part 3 - Debris - PG - 04/03/07

[leik2]

I was about to cry, then i read your note.
For a man so knowledgeable and wordly, boy sure doesn't know how to say (NO!) a word when it really counts.

[PMD]

Well, all I can say is that Lionel and his ex's who have tried to kill him has messed him up in the head. However, our Chloester will wipe away the cobwebs and bring him back to reason---maybe with a little embarrassment on his part. <g>

Oh, and I have to say, getting to beta this piece was a relief for me, in regards to my writing. In fact, I think it's inspired a little piece I like to call On the outside, looking in.

And in conclusion---ahhem---if Chloe existed before Smallville, Lex would never turn bad. I truly believe that. Like, you really want Chloe mad at you. <g> Seriously though, well done, teejei. Can't wait for the next piece that I get to beta for you. Oh man, you guys are so much better than I am at this stuff---I'm surrounded by genius'.

[jaxie926]

i love your writing style! great story, now i'm going to read part 2

[jaxie926]

I love the way you write, and your characters. I believe if the writers EVER DID get a Chlex clue, that Chloe and Lex would have to go through all this drama before they ended up together. Can't wait for more.

[arkakitty]

Awww the insight is great. I loved, how he was so dense and insecure and that you still followed the series. I really enjoyed reading it. I'm off now to read part 2, if you'll excuse me.

[arkakitty]

Ohhhhh so sad,.... I pity them.... but it started so well....well it didn't but...you get my point...this is sad....but I love it anyway

[prerogativ2315]

that was sad

[Kit Merlot]

My God, you must have Lex convincing Chloe that he doesn't love Lana.

I hope a sequel is planned?

[teejei]

everyone:

1. sorry if the chapter implies Lexana. it TOTALLY doesn't mean Lana-love on Lex's part.

2. the epilogue is already outlined. but i'm not to going to write till i get the backstory out first.

3. the backstory [so the story arc would be complete] would probably be out in 2-3weeks, the outline already approved by my beta. RL is back with a vengeance, and i'll be juggling school and work.

4. as i always say in my A/N's, there will be a happy ending. Chlex just need to have some angst and drama drawn out between them so that they start over with a clean slate. i swear by all my rep points [w/c you're free to add to, btw. ].

thanks for all the comments. i'm still on the feedback-high.

[JosiCuervo]

This is great.... *runs to part 2*